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是谁给你那明眸？

上城
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Posted: 2008-11-01 20:43:45 Post subject: 是谁给你那明眸？

是谁给你那明眸让我不惜笔墨驻立在这潺潺溪流守候怀拥竖琴的旅客我要与之偕临千年的楼阁为你倾诉那不倦的衷情手指纤柔着桥上的行客将一幅画镶进我的风景行吟诗人呵，那渴望的麦田曾经占据露丝忧郁的心当朝阳普照明丽的一天苍穹下静默的琴窗口将世界切割便飞出无边的歌 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-11-01 20:46:44 Post subject:

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上城
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Posted: 2008-11-01 20:53:20 Post subject:

谢谢夸奖。好久没有听见别人的赞美了 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-11-01 21:23:57 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

伤城的诗歌有潜力

同意呢.
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-11-02 03:39:58 Post subject:

喜欢这一首~ 语感气息很有翻译诗歌的风味~

上城
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Posted: 2008-11-02 05:21:29 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

伤城的诗歌有潜力

同意呢.

看到你们都这样看。我能说些什么呢？ Shocked

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上城
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Posted: 2008-11-02 05:28:50 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

喜欢这一首~
语感气息很有翻译诗歌的风味~

哈哈。好眼力。我觉得诗歌都被西方人写尽了，中国人实在翻不出什么新花样。但是这一首，语感方面虽然相似，但绝对完全不同。我还没有看到有哪一个翻译家能翻出我这样的水平 Very Happy

这首诗看似简单。没有数年的修炼是写不出来的（就是洛夫也写不出来）。现在我写的大多算是练笔。 Very Happy

我的看法：自由体还是应该好好的发展一下。
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Posted: 2008-11-02 07:10:02 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

博弈 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

伤城的诗歌有潜力

同意呢.

看到你们都这样看。我能说些什么呢？ Shocked

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