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 Posted: 2009-08-02 06:40:17 Post subject: 小小的海島(一詩二寫, 中式英文) |
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Balboa Island
小小的海島
The end of road lead
To the ferry
To you
路的盡頭引我
向渡口
的你
Open, a story book
Each house a phrase
Each pole a sentence
Each street a page
打開了, 一本故事書
每一間方舍是一句片語
每一柱電線桿將片語連成句子
每一條街, 一頁故事
I have just read three page
Indulging-ly
With kid accent
我還只翻了三頁
寵溺的
卻像帶著兒時鄉音
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William Zhou周道模
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Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
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| Posted: 2009-08-09 11:15:54 Post subject: |
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阅读，学习。
“方舍”？ 房舍？
three page? three pages?
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博弈
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| Posted: 2009-08-19 07:01:28 Post subject: |
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因那儿许多房子确实是方的。
英文部分若照英文语法，则有不止一处错误的。
概念上，这是用中文的语法，借英文的‘简体’字。
照语言简化的进化趋势，有一天英文会像中文一样，
以单一条件界定其余词性。
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-08-23 14:21:18 Post subject: |
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"中式英文", 我最好收声。 
问好。
这次旅游途中看到的两则：
小心地滑
Be careful of landslide
化妆品
skin food
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| Posted: 2009-08-23 17:36:49 Post subject: |
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wrt health
i like the concept 'skin food'
sounds very organic
better than makeup--poison
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