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解脱（中英文对照）

顾小花
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Joined: 23 Aug 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-12 02:15:14 Post subject: 解脱（中英文对照）

《解脱》顾小花（中国/南京）今晚，我要整理一些月光让所有的水，穿过十月的瞳孔岸边不要停船只是，芦苇还在摇摆我是泅渡的人，两手空空去年数过的星星不再出现黑夜还在怀里，没了喋喋不休天空从腹部悄然打开这个季节适合放逐远去的花朵没有留下颜色文字苍白，泛着柔弱的香味去和留，都是一种幸福 Disengagement by Gu Xiaohua ( from Nanjing,China ) Tonight I will put some moonlight in order Let all of water go straight through the pupils of October Don't stay boats at the side of beach Just reeds wobble still there I'm a person by swimming, and nothing with me Some stars I remembered last year can’t reappear Night still in mind and none of endless talking Sky in the belly with quiet unfolding This season is comfortable to banish And the flowers far away aren't leaving color behind The pale characters distribute tenellous fragrant smells Going and staying are happiness _________________ 春风吹又生:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1285636777

jemmy
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Joined: 06 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-12 04:37:32 Post subject:

好好学习,前途光明 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-15 23:32:44 Post subject:

汉诗像写意画。英语似有修改的地方，如： all of water ---- all the water ? just reeds wobble still there ---- just the reeds are still wobbling there ? 等 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-11-18 11:20:52 Post subject:

。很有水准的作品：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-12-26 19:53:04 Post subject:

我只欣赏汉语部分.问好大家.

kino
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Posted: 2008-01-23 00:53:45 Post subject:

诗很好，很有感觉。翻译有些地方表意不清。 at the side of beach ——don't moor the boats in shore或者其他考虑上下文的译法 I'm a person by swimming ——I'd swim across, with nothing in hands 。。。。。

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