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相片 PHOTOGRAPH

非马
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Posted: 2007-02-13 19:46:11 Post subject: 相片 PHOTOGRAPH

相片他们把他的影像放大了又放大直到每一个毛孔都成了伟大的空洞还没来得及装入历史的巨框严峻的时间老人已在那里歪头觑眼倒退著端详一步一步将它缩小还原 PHOTOGRAPH They kept enlarging his image until its every pore became a great hollow But before it could be put into the big frame of history Time, the critical old man already started the work of reduction step by step as he walked backward squinting at it from a distance _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

白水
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Posted: 2007-02-13 20:20:19 Post subject:

一大一小, 一虚一实. 仅用"歪头觑眼"四个字就把严肃尖锐的讽刺形象的调和成一首诙谐的诗.着力无需重, 却需在刃...... 学习了

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-02-13 21:46:30 Post subject:

好诗我将非马先生的个人专栏也加了这样的功能：在其它主要版面的帖子，自动在个人专栏显示：无须重复发帖了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

非马
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Posted: 2007-02-14 06:07:02 Post subject:

谢谢和平岛，这样就省事多了。也谢谢白水的阅评。问好。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

kino
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Posted: 2007-02-24 06:25:00 Post subject:

欣赏，学习了。

博弈
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Posted: 2007-02-24 07:31:37 Post subject:

先生的诗, 功力深厚. 佩服! _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

非马
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Posted: 2007-02-24 08:54:01 Post subject:

kino,博弈新年好！祝创作丰收！ _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

kokho
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Posted: 2007-02-28 21:21:01 Post subject:

对比的放大，成为了批判性的缩小！还是觉得英文本比较好。。。尤其是 - as he walked backward squinting at it from a distance _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

非马
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Posted: 2007-03-01 07:20:37 Post subject:

谢谢kokho的阅读与评语。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

余刃
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Posted: 2007-03-08 17:39:14 Post subject:

Time, the critical old man already started the work of reduction 先生的这句传神

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-29 21:36:15 Post subject:

又是两段，传神 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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