| 钓月 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-09-29 00:21:12    Post subject: 暂不死亡 |   |  
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				| 当锋利的弯镰 在麦地翻飞闪亮
 一种熟悉的气息
 就笼罩了乡场
 经幡飞扬的时节
 却洋溢着醉人芬芳
 
 当苹果红红唇吻
 印上惨白的寒霜
 一只亲切的曲调
 便悠扬地奏响
 冷风打着唿哨
 将岁月导向死亡
 
 死神的小把戏
 我是了如指掌
 从出生之日起
 我已习以为常
 为了无所畏惧
 旦夕演练于床榻之上
 
 可以死得游刃有余
 可以死得自得辉煌
 我甚至在睡乡里
 称量过自己骨灰重量
 只是我暂不死亡
 面前横亘着一道隔障
 
 我得日夜趱程
 赶向夕阳下远方
 采撷一千篮花草
 写下一万句诗行
 再刻一方无字碑
 供子孙后代怀想
 
 08年9月于钓月小筑
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 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮
 
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		| 韩少君 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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				|  Posted: 2008-09-29 01:07:08    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 你说时好容易 我活命何其难
 
 阎王让我三更去
 我自难挨到五更
 
 佩服!
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 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-09-29 17:12:52    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 看破红尘了  |  | 
	
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		| 钓月 秀才
 
 
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		| 钓月 秀才
 
 
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		| 秀水 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 31 May 2008
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				|  Posted: 2008-10-03 20:55:39    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 可以死得游刃有余 可以死得自得辉煌
 我甚至在睡乡里
 称量过自己骨灰重量
 只是我暂不死亡
 面前横亘着一道隔障
 
 
 问好.颀赏
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		| 半溪明月 榜眼
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2008-10-04 05:24:18    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 这首句子的语气节奏比以前的好~ 问好钓月!
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		| 钓月 秀才
 
 
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		| nobody 进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-10-04 22:18:10    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 死得游刃有余 。。。帅! 
 死得很精巧,死得很深奥,死得很朦胧,死得很高潮 。。。
 
 死得 。。。很奥运
 
 哈哈。
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		| 曲元奇 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-10-04 22:28:43    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 第四段  超凡脱俗 |  | 
	
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