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暂不死亡
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PostPosted: 2008-09-29 00:21:12    Post subject: 暂不死亡 Reply with quote

当锋利的弯镰
在麦地翻飞闪亮
一种熟悉的气息
就笼罩了乡场
经幡飞扬的时节
却洋溢着醉人芬芳

当苹果红红唇吻
印上惨白的寒霜
一只亲切的曲调
便悠扬地奏响
冷风打着唿哨
将岁月导向死亡

死神的小把戏
我是了如指掌
从出生之日起
我已习以为常
为了无所畏惧
旦夕演练于床榻之上

可以死得游刃有余
可以死得自得辉煌
我甚至在睡乡里
称量过自己骨灰重量
只是我暂不死亡
面前横亘着一道隔障

我得日夜趱程
赶向夕阳下远方
采撷一千篮花草
写下一万句诗行
再刻一方无字碑
供子孙后代怀想

08年9月于钓月小筑
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-09-29 01:07:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

你说时好容易
我活命何其难

阎王让我三更去
我自难挨到五更

佩服!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-09-29 17:12:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

看破红尘了 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 02:46:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="韩少君"]你说时好容易
我活命何其难

阎王让我三更去
我自难挨到五更

佩服![/quote]

祝韩老师国庆节快乐!
我们五百年前是一家!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 02:48:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]看破红尘了 Very Happy[/quote]
尚未参透!祝国庆节好!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 20:55:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以死得游刃有余
可以死得自得辉煌
我甚至在睡乡里
称量过自己骨灰重量
只是我暂不死亡
面前横亘着一道隔障


问好.颀赏
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 05:24:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首句子的语气节奏比以前的好~
问好钓月!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 15:55:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="半溪明月"]这首句子的语气节奏比以前的好~
问好钓月![/quote]
明月今夜悬,
朗照我心扉!
谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 22:18:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

死得游刃有余 。。。帅!

死得很精巧,死得很深奥,死得很朦胧,死得很高潮 。。。

死得 。。。很奥运

哈哈。
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I'm nobody! Who are you?
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 22:28:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

第四段 超凡脱俗
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PostPosted: 2008-10-05 15:08:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="秀水"]可以死得游刃有余
...[/quote]
问好山东作家秀水!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-05 19:07:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="nobody"]死得游刃有余 。。。帅!
...[/quote]
那么多!新奇!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-06 15:12:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="曲元奇"]第四段 超凡脱俗[/quote]

问好曲元奇!
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