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徐娘，早已不再半老

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-12 13:24:13 Post subject:

我知秋风秋风就要冷了轻轻如我, 如我犹疑的手牵你飘逸的裙裾不舍依依委婉之句～喜欢这首！问好白水～中秋快乐！

秀水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 13:30:47 Post subject:

白水中秋快乐 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 18:18:11 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

后庭那泓秋水
是你蓝色的明眸
融我于你，昼
之梦幻

冲浪, 你要来TORONTO肯定喜欢这小泳池, 可以冲浪啊. 可现在很多人却它嫌累赘, 要填掉 Smile

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 18:21:41 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

依依不舍的我
...

写着好玩的, 还有几首都构思好了, 一来前几天忙, 二来也怕大家笑我不务正业, 就搁那儿了 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 18:23:52 Post subject:

新华 wrote:

很有趣、勾魂的小诗，问好。

是啊, TORONTO好几个朋友都笑我的魂被"她"勾了去 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 18:25:52 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

我知秋风
...

谢谢月亮, 中秋愉快

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-14 18:26:36 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

白水中秋快乐

问好中秋.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-09-14 19:04:40 Post subject:

白水兄的半老徐娘体检有点问题，最近又失恋了。可要多保重啊！恋爱要有耐心。

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-15 16:06:52 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水兄的半老徐娘体检有点问题，最近又失恋了。可要多保重啊！恋爱要有耐心。

谢谢QINGHONGH, 请放心,下次我们找个年方二八的 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-09-16 07:28:28 Post subject: bhbhh

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

白水兄的半老徐娘体检有点问题，最近又失恋了。可要多保重啊！恋爱要有耐心。

谢谢QINGHONGH, 请放心,下次我们找个年方二八的 Very Happy

年方十六，娇美含羞。
窈窕淑女，君子好逑。
祝白水兄恋爱成功！我们盼着喝你们的喜酒啊！

闲雅
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Posted: 2008-09-17 17:15:49 Post subject:

请教白水大诗人，操生涩英语，如何说： “徐娘，你若半老，定是我命中情人。” 不会是“miss xu, ...”吧 _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-19 14:47:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

白水兄的半老徐娘体检有点问题，最近又失恋了。可要多保重啊！恋爱要有耐心。

谢谢QINGHONGH, 请放心,下次我们找个年方二八的 Very Happy

年方十六，娇美含羞。
窈窕淑女，君子好逑。
祝白水兄恋爱成功！我们盼着喝你们的喜酒啊！ ...

这喜酒看来挺难喝到, 窈窕淑女们好像是觉得白水兄长得不够帅 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-19 14:57:09 Post subject:

闲雅 wrote:

请教白水大诗人，
操生涩英语，如何说：
“徐娘，你若半老，
定是我命中情人。”

不会是“miss xu, ...”吧
_________________

...

答闲雅
意译:MRS. XU
尊称:MADAM XU
直译:MOTHER XU Wink

音译:NIANG XU
香港话: 徐太
国语:徐夫人
陕西话: 屋里的徐
还要吗 Confused

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Posted: 2008-09-27 16:39:38 Post subject:

唱给徐娘的歌动人。

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Posted: 2008-09-28 02:25:17 Post subject:

有味道，有情趣。欣赏！ _________________ 何剑声：写诗是一次心灵的艳遇！

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-28 17:59:15 Post subject:

新华 wrote:

唱给徐娘的歌动人。

问好新华

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-28 18:01:17 Post subject:

何剑声 wrote:

有味道，有情趣。欣赏！

谢谢朋友. 你若知道本诗写作动机,准会笑痛肚子 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-09-29 00:13:44 Post subject:

况味其中！问好！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-30 17:20:09 Post subject:

问好钓月, 节日好

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-09-30 17:26:01 Post subject:

白水兄最近有没有约会徐娘或窈窕淑女啊？不知现在是恋爱季节还是等待季节？婚姻大事，可要三思而行喔！

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