| 古埙 童生
 
 
 Joined: 21 May 2008
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				|  Posted: 2008-06-21 13:04:14    Post subject: 五律二手(二) |   |  
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				| 闽北南平九峰山 蝉暑乱纷纷,青光大气薰。九峰隳次列,造化失精斤。
 四鹤三山匿,双溪一剑分。嘉言怀沫若,云水起雄文。
 
 (九峰桥头有郭沫若先生诗刻;四鹤,指朱熹弟子程颐、程颢等人;双溪,指沙溪和富屯溪,晋双剑化龙典出于此)
 
 夏   雨
 天凉暑气和,饮解醉颜酡。倏忽揆惊变,乒乓雨滂沱。
 山墙移巨阵,峻岭汇元鼍。大块能假我,菰舟遂泛波。
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		| 松云老人 秀才
 
 
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				| 功力深厚!赏! |  | 
	
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		| 松云老人 秀才
 
 
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		| 古埙 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2008-06-23 19:25:12    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢松老。 |  | 
	
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