古埙 童生
Joined: 21 May 2008 Posts: 92
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Posted: 2008-06-21 13:04:14 Post subject: 五律二手(二) |
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闽北南平九峰山
蝉暑乱纷纷,青光大气薰。九峰隳次列,造化失精斤。
四鹤三山匿,双溪一剑分。嘉言怀沫若,云水起雄文。
(九峰桥头有郭沫若先生诗刻;四鹤,指朱熹弟子程颐、程颢等人;双溪,指沙溪和富屯溪,晋双剑化龙典出于此)
夏 雨
天凉暑气和,饮解醉颜酡。倏忽揆惊变,乒乓雨滂沱。
山墙移巨阵,峻岭汇元鼍。大块能假我,菰舟遂泛波。 |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-21 17:21:05 Post subject: |
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功力深厚!赏! |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-21 17:21:34 Post subject: |
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功力深厚!赏! |
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古埙 童生
Joined: 21 May 2008 Posts: 92
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Posted: 2008-06-23 19:25:12 Post subject: |
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谢松老。 |
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