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Farewell to the Moon(原创双语)

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Posted: 2008-05-12 05:40:40 Post subject: Farewell to the Moon(原创双语)

Cold heels Tap out a metallic rhythm. Quiet streets Empty the confused heart. Here's the parting place. I look at you, you at the moon. 别月冷冷的鞋跟敲出金属音响静谧的街道空了攘乱心房到了分手地方我望你，你望月亮 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-05-13 21:54:30 Post subject:

不错。'metalic' or 'metallic'? _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2008-05-15 01:36:01 Post subject:

谢谢你的指点! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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