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你我的距离究竟多远(子时,我终于穿越黑暗,登上你的海岸~)

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-15 07:55:30 Post subject: 你我的距离究竟多远(子时,我终于穿越黑暗,登上你的海岸~)

你我的距离究竟多远多少次了我卑微的头颅仍洞穿不过你的海底多少次了我绝望细数一片落叶又一片落叶踏遍万水千山落叶化蝶为雨你脸色苍白似近又远你曾经的笑颜僵硬在海震后的残垣梦中摇曳着你的风景遥望彼岸你背影迷朦你我的距离究竟多远把亲吻的欲念书写成行所有的诗笺都只为了为了向你靠近赶海的翅膀隐于大雾海水退后 2007-1-15

nobody
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Posted: 2007-01-15 12:10:33 Post subject:

看来凡事都有好处，登陆不了，憋出诗来了，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

月光情怀
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Posted: 2007-01-15 18:31:11 Post subject:

隔着遥远的距离把梦遗失在他的胸口多年后所有的欲念都已消亡所有的情怀里只剩下了诗 _________________ 在心的残缺处去完整诗的美丽 QQ：33179345 msn:wuxizhuo123456@hotmail.com 个人主页：http://hi.baidu.com/xizhuo欢迎光临。

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Posted: 2007-01-15 18:52:30 Post subject:

MM的诗歌进步很快, 贺一下

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-15 21:00:29 Post subject:

白水 wrote:

MM的诗歌进步很快, 贺一下 Very Happy

白水就是月光吧?好象只有他这么喊过我,呵呵，以后要改喊JJ~

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Posted: 2007-01-16 10:07:34 Post subject:

有沧桑之感哦－－踏遍万水千山落叶化蝶为雨 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-17 08:31:05 Post subject:

维鹿延 wrote:

有沧桑之感哦－－

踏遍万水千山
落叶化蝶为雨

其实就是登录不上来给憋的,突然的灵感,也是表达我对诗歌的一种追求吧

晚上，我又是开了无数遍才打开帖子~问好!
发了一遍还没发过去,我晕~

白水
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Posted: 2007-01-17 18:35:13 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

白水 wrote:

MM的诗歌进步很快, 贺一下 Very Happy

白水就是月光吧?好象只有他这么喊过我,呵呵，以后要改喊JJ~

哈. 白水也罢, 月光也罢, 逃不出半溪明月; JJ也罢, MM 也罢, 均敲自一尺键盘.

记得有一诗友文章相当清纯, 我一直以MM相称. 没想到见面时却见其气质端庄, 稳重待人, 年龄也远比其他诗友大些. 让我好尴尬. 她到坦然, 说: "没关系, MM是很多文字的声母." 从此, MM就是美美吧, 大家都美滋滋的多好 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-01-17 18:43:42 Post subject:

半溪很有进步 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-18 07:15:10 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

半溪很有进步

谢和平岛鼓励~有点点感悟,还要继续努力!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-01-18 07:19:15 Post subject:

白水 wrote:

半溪明月 wrote:

白水 wrote:

MM的诗歌进步很快, 贺一下 Very Happy

白水就是月光吧?好象只有他这么喊过我,呵呵，以后要改喊JJ~

呵呵，我跟你说的她差不多~随便怎么喊吧 Very Happy

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