qinghongh
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 Posted: 2008-03-21 05:21:30 Post subject: 五绝 春日偶感（一） |
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五绝 春日偶感（一）
日暖冰消散，风和绿四方。
春光脚步近，荡漾在他乡。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 11:04:37 Post subject: |
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春风得意，流连他乡。问好！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 13:14:02 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢黄老师点评。问春安！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 14:28:25 Post subject: |
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谢黄老师。发现“连”为平声，出律了。现改为“荡漾在他乡”。 |
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莹雪
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Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 17:28:12 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏春意盎然！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 19:22:49 Post subject: |
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| 谢莹雪MM赏评！问春天好！ |
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莹雪
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Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-03-21 19:28:46 Post subject: |
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| 谢莹雪MM赏评！问春天好！ |
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