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《大写意》
了因大兄
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 18:46:19    Post subject: 《大写意》 Reply with quote
《大写意》

张飞，想过李白的生活
树叶上的脉络，那浓墨里也有流动的水气。

我的知己，一棵普通的白菜
脸上没有桃花和红荷的红粉

我爱书法，那不羁的刀意
那磨刀的石，永藏心里

那些古朴的汉印，红红的脸
多是方的，你细看，也有羞涩的圆韵

我更爱那水墨的大写意
兰叶是剑，蟹壳上也有小小的旋风

让我来一个，我就老老实实的画一棵白菜
然后，再用朱笔，遣樱桃的羞红
致白菜的面颊，白菜要用墨越少越好。

2008/3/18
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 18:50:19    Post subject: 切大白菜似的 Reply with quote
白菜要用墨越少越好。

张飞善砍头,又工书画 Very Happy
结果自己也难逃大白菜的宿命
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了因大兄
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 19:43:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好!和平岛
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 19:45:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
悟得真透, 绝 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-03-17 21:37:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗!!!问候了因大兄诗人!!!!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 05:00:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
了因兄画白菜了啊？蟹壳上也有小小的旋风 　　真要到这地步就成名家了～
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歪歪1981
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 05:30:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
这样的感悟值得借鉴，问好
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