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（独领风骚-图像）《春染了我的黄》

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Posted: 2008-03-15 03:44:43 Post subject: （独领风骚-图像）《春染了我的黄》

感谢诗友们对合心的帮助，来张图文表达谢意。欢迎大家跟贴或指正。《春染了我的黄》一路，我只看到枝芽和几簇嫩嫩的草仰脸小儿，喊出了一串春意盎然盎然，没有腊梅也没有桃花，我却在不知觉中藏了一袖的红粉和清香想着要写的诗行还有诗中歌唱的光草儿轻轻，耳边拂过 “春染了我的黄” 雨中印记-苏茉儿、上苍予大地以柔情-诗盗、听雨-悠子、 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-15 04:54:04 Post subject:

春穿着新织滴裳，款款迩来～很美哪～～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-03-15 07:36:18 Post subject:

欢迎合心快乐接棒！第二段是不是"仰着小脸儿"呀，咋读着像少了一个字。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-15 09:37:15 Post subject:

《雨中印记》站在雨中默默的想你以一叶小草的姿势鲜亮而澄明静静的听细雨飘坠的音符轻轻、轻轻敲打着心灵往事被雨滴一串串缝起又一串串飘离幽幽之间爱由不得自己此情此景，我只想一个人默默的想你以一叶小草的姿势撑一盏新绿为你 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-15 14:22:38 Post subject:

谢谢合心加入行列！茉儿有空也把作品拉到板子上来。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-15 20:20:37 Post subject:

仰脸小儿小孩子嘛开心 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

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Posted: 2008-03-17 17:21:32 Post subject:

合心 wrote:

仰脸小儿
小孩子嘛

开心 Laughing

噢，原来是这样读滴，嗯，懂。
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默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-18 00:38:35 Post subject:

交作业！发到现代版喳呼喳呼～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-25 05:30:27 Post subject:

交作业 . 听雨

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