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（独领风骚-图像）上苍予大地以柔情
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 00:34:21    Post subject: （独领风骚-图像）上苍予大地以柔情 Reply with quote
（独领风骚-图像）春染了我的黄 合心主持


上苍予大地以柔情

无法超越
上苍予大地以柔情
承受、浸润、耽溺
上苍予大地以柔情
对抗、屈服、逃离
无法超越，再也无法超越
那顽强的曾经，那永恒的相信

这一度以为的幻灭，终须幻灭
曾经有力的背影
而我一度以为，对抗的是我自己
而我一度以为，当春天来临
挺着的是我自己
对抗、攻击、耽溺
上苍予大地以柔情

2008/3/16那天1200
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 02:33:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
上苍予大地以柔情
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 05:00:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 09:10:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
这首也不咋滴，希望有机会再改过。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-18 18:11:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
没有啊，觉得挺好。你对自己的要求太高了。
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