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致友

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Posted: 2008-03-11 10:14:00 Post subject: 致友

致友其实我爱读你的诗或许你不矫饰的原因其实我爱读着你的诗仿佛可以看到你的心听到你的叹息—远望的眼睛有时我用针线把呼吸串接起来像在读你的嘴唇竟也干燥了起来 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

悠子
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Posted: 2008-03-11 11:33:01 Post subject:

呵呵，这个不是写给诗盗的吧

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:28:42 Post subject: 就我了解，不是！他对我的作品从来没给过好评。

悠子 wrote:

呵呵，这个不是写给诗盗的吧

俺记恨着哪！
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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:30:20 Post subject:

继续猜！俺猜是那谁谁～谁！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

苏茉儿
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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:34:37 Post subject:

就是那谁谁谁谁谁！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:37:36 Post subject: 切！我是知道那谁谁谁，你是瞎说那谁谁谁！大不同～

苏茉儿 wrote:

就是那谁谁谁谁谁！

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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:42:56 Post subject: Re: 切！我是知道那谁谁谁，你是瞎说那谁谁谁！大不同～

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

就是那谁谁谁谁谁！

耶，你说的是谁谁谁。谁嘛，除了博弈兄，
没人知道是谁，反正我不知道是谁谁！
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荷梦
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Posted: 2008-03-11 14:43:18 Post subject:

听到你的叹息—远望的眼睛揣摩了半天，原来中间不是“一”字，是个“——”

点点儿
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Posted: 2008-03-12 05:06:28 Post subject:

真想自作N情一次呀～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

博弈
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Posted: 2008-03-12 08:34:46 Post subject:

其实是，最近有位朋友失恋，有另一位朋友，他的父亲得癌症，都借诗抒怀，我看了不知如何留语，但感动，徘徊良久。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-03-12 10:33:53 Post subject:

不论写给谁，都很动人。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2008-03-13 02:33:23 Post subject:

诗真的是个好东西：） _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

苏茉儿
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Posted: 2008-03-13 07:30:57 Post subject:

噢！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-03-13 21:38:28 Post subject:

一首好诗不一定句句珍珠有一句好名垂千古听见你长长的叹息---远望你的眼睛

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Posted: 2008-03-14 11:06:17 Post subject:

其实, it is the vernacular language in the first line that I feel moving... _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-03-14 22:43:30 Post subject: Re: 其实, it is the vernacular language in the first line that...

Lake wrote:

其实, it is the vernacular language in the first line that I feel moving...

辣妹！发发慈悲心，写首作品来瞧瞧。
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Posted: 2008-03-14 23:18:58 Post subject:

我想，有时候不必美词好诗，用一种细细心情，一种人生经历，也能读出好诗，这是读者的修炼；那么这首小诗就在你的心里完成了它的最佳状态。谢谢。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-03-15 05:01:57 Post subject:

读出好诗－－读出好诗～～～读读读读读读读读读读读读读读～很有启发 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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