莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 00:23:27 Post subject: 添字采桑子—新柳 |
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微风新柳轻盈舞,枝秀娉婷。
枝秀娉婷,缕缕丝丝,飘荡为春灵。
佳丝夜送纤柔雨,暂伴苍灵。
暂伴苍灵,休引哀诗,且作乐来听。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 07:37:06 Post subject: |
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新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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灯台小老鼠 童生
Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 82 Location: 中国广东广州 灯台小老鼠Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 07:50:42 Post subject: |
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好意境,美图画。可惜“伴苍灵”只是“暂”,而“哀诗”“休引”却已题,还是感伤 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-09 16:07:11 Post subject: Re: 新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。 |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。 |
谢谢您的点评!不久室外的景色也会像图一样美丽了。 |
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