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添字采桑子—新柳
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 00:23:27    Post subject: 添字采桑子—新柳 Reply with quote


微风新柳轻盈舞,枝秀娉婷。
枝秀娉婷,缕缕丝丝,飘荡为春灵。

佳丝夜送纤柔雨,暂伴苍灵。
暂伴苍灵,休引哀诗,且作乐来听。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 07:37:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。
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灯台小老鼠
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 07:50:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

好意境,美图画。可惜“伴苍灵”只是“暂”,而“哀诗”“休引”却已题,还是感伤
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 16:07:11    Post subject: Re: 新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。 Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
新柳轻盈,春雨温柔,图美词美。
谢谢您的点评!不久室外的景色也会像图一样美丽了。
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