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添字采桑子—新柳

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-09 00:23:27 Post subject: 添字采桑子—新柳

微风新柳轻盈舞，枝秀娉婷。枝秀娉婷，缕缕丝丝，飘荡为春灵。佳丝夜送纤柔雨，暂伴苍灵。暂伴苍灵，休引哀诗，且作乐来听。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-03-09 07:37:06 Post subject:

新柳轻盈，春雨温柔，图美词美。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

灯台小老鼠
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Posted: 2008-03-09 07:50:42 Post subject:

好意境，美图画。可惜“伴苍灵”只是“暂”，而“哀诗”“休引”却已题，还是感伤

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-03-09 16:07:11 Post subject: Re: 新柳轻盈，春雨温柔，图美词美。

黄洋界 wrote:

新柳轻盈，春雨温柔，图美词美。

谢谢您的点评！不久室外的景色也会像图一样美丽了。

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