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春天的豹子（外二）

歪歪1981
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Posted: 2008-03-01 03:29:23 Post subject: 春天的豹子（外二）

■春天的豹子风不吹，青草未动，二月空旷着黄羊和疣猪们把持着警醒深处有一张悲苦的脸有两道黑色的泪痕曾经鲜红，像干旱般不顾一切。颧骨被压得更高了，这一身阴影如块状的浮萍拥向那个扭曲的点对此，椅子里的人不置可否 ■我渴望听到雷声和寻常的饥饿无关那瞬间的光亮也非很好的理由甚至我早早爱上了：这长久的寂静，和黑蝴蝶埋入根茎的猩红斑点还有那一再临近的城市街心公园中的一个预设的棋局。在输掉桃花之前我要看她们在水上翻转和沉默或和阳光在枝头，摇晃着用一半的春天埋掉自己 ■消逝在一条路上可以假装非此既彼沿着光线或回过头来数阴影，攀爬或倒立或者反方向盛开不要推开路边的那扇木门那些烧掉的枯草又站了回去那些香甜的鼾声或老去，或醒来

nobody
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Posted: 2008-03-01 04:25:29 Post subject:

都很正点。欢迎歪歪。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-03-01 06:27:16 Post subject:

学习握手 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/liuyuechen8

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Posted: 2008-03-01 07:34:32 Post subject:

外，歪耶～～～什么是外2，欢迎指教内涅？ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

歪歪1981
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Posted: 2008-03-01 17:53:57 Post subject:

谢谢nobody斑竹和Holybolt的鼓励，请多多批评~~~ 问点点儿好（：谢谢关注握手

歪歪1981
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Posted: 2008-03-01 17:55:10 Post subject:

谢谢nobody斑竹和Holybolt的鼓励，请多多批评~~~ 问点点儿好（：谢谢关注握手

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Posted: 2008-03-02 03:42:53 Post subject:

尤其喜欢第二首。问好！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

陈亚伟
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Posted: 2008-03-02 05:16:38 Post subject:

有个性的诗歌！

歪歪1981
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Posted: 2008-03-02 18:27:40 Post subject:

问好阿依琼裙和陈亚伟，请多多批评（：

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Posted: 2008-03-02 20:08:27 Post subject: Re: 都很正点。欢迎歪歪。

nobody wrote:

都很正点。
欢迎歪歪。

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