燕庄生铁 秀才
Joined: 06 May 2007 Posts: 116
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Posted: 2008-02-29 00:09:15 Post subject: 《墙》 |
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任何一步都横亘在脚下的
班驳的墙 如果此生必须打开
让我 用手掌摸索
两张默然对峙的脸 照不出
彼此的影子 五千年哑默的嘴
苦苦弯成向上的笑意
门的缝隙隐藏在深处
以天问之姿仰望 掌心的神经末梢
布满云翳冷冷的面孔
一百四十斤的体重
面对一张古老屏障 敲碎的手指
倾听一个囚徒内心的叫喊
大鸟湿漉漉的翅膀 呼啦啦旋升
等待一把锈蚀的钥匙
被灵魂的歌声磨亮
斑斑血迹的某一处 高举的手
忽然凝固 扫过的目光
丢失了最初扣问的梦
扶摇直上 死死抓住一片想象领地
我要用一生囚住这堵墙
轮回在下一个千年 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-02-29 15:03:02 Post subject: |
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欣赏。问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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回到拉萨 秀才

Joined: 07 Feb 2008 Posts: 131
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Posted: 2008-02-29 17:04:30 Post subject: |
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哥哥的诗歌变化越来越大。祝贺呀。 _________________
点击进入回到拉萨的火车 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-03-01 02:05:54 Post subject: |
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一堵灵魂的墙拟或现实的墙,一个囚徒的呐喊,最重要的是不要失去扣问的梦,好诗欣赏! |
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燕庄生铁 秀才
Joined: 06 May 2007 Posts: 116
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Posted: 2008-03-02 20:52:58 Post subject: Re: 欣赏。问好。 |
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问好,谢来读。握。 |
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燕庄生铁 秀才
Joined: 06 May 2007 Posts: 116
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Posted: 2008-03-02 20:54:07 Post subject: Re: 哥哥的诗歌变化越来越大。祝贺呀。 |
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回到拉萨 wrote: |
哥哥的诗歌变化越来越大。祝贺呀。 |
拉萨好。变变变,寻求突破。多批。握。 |
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燕庄生铁 秀才
Joined: 06 May 2007 Posts: 116
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Posted: 2008-03-02 21:00:41 Post subject: Re: 一堵灵魂的墙拟或现实的墙,一个囚徒的呐喊... |
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半溪明月 wrote: |
一堵灵魂的墙拟或现实的墙,一个囚徒的呐喊,最重要的是不要失去扣问的梦,好诗欣赏! |
问好半溪明月。谢评阅。意见重要,接纳。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 19:13:12 Post subject: |
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厚重感人. 欢迎常来 |
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笑后 秀才

Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 136 Location: From nanjing 笑后Collection |
Posted: 2008-03-03 21:30:11 Post subject: |
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问好燕庄生铁,学习和欣赏,是千家诗的燕庄生铁吧,心雨和玲子,都认识,问好你们。 _________________ 廖蕙琳 以写悼亡诗而自成一家,一意孤行! |
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