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蒙古栎林以南的峡谷之一

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左岸
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Posted: 2006-12-10 21:01:40 Post subject:

[quote="kokho"]■一片桦树叶一片硕大的桦树叶斜横着，叶面上茎脉布满生命的轨迹。好奇的我把它凑到耳边一阵车轮奔驰的声音由远而近，我不知道在我这里有没有一站《》喜欢这首，看过了很多诗歌形象蒙太奇。。第一次看到　音响蒙太奇；））。quote]。问好kokho，一首小诗能得到你如此看重，大喜过望，还请多赐教，远握！ _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2006-12-11 06:02:50 Post subject: 很纯正!

这三个都漂亮!等你一组都上来好好品尝

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Posted: 2006-12-14 15:33:41 Post subject:

■黑鹰现在我要描述的是一只黑鹰从二千米高处滑落，对于天空来说只不过少了一粒沙子但大地，却多了一块需重新洗牌的夜 ■一片桦树叶一片硕大的桦树叶斜横着，叶面上茎脉布满生命的轨迹。好奇的我把它凑到耳边一阵车轮奔驰的声音由远而近，我不知道在我这里有没有一站《》形象群的互动处理的很新颖　：））问好。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

左岸
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Posted: 2006-12-17 20:00:26 Post subject: Re: 特别耐读

左岸 wrote:

迪拜 wrote:

特别耐读

多读,会有不同感觉

问好迪拜，谢谢，

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左岸
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Posted: 2006-12-17 20:04:41 Post subject: Re: 很纯正!

孙慧峰 wrote:

这三个都漂亮!等你一组都上来好好品尝 Smile

问好慧峰，得到你的首肯高兴，向你的好诗学习。
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Posted: 2006-12-26 07:38:52 Post subject:

再读, 仍觉好. 加精. 等<之二>

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Posted: 2006-12-27 23:13:50 Post subject:

如橄榄小巧，细品味更浓。问好老兄 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2006-12-29 00:12:01 Post subject:

[quote="月光"]再读, 仍觉好. 加精. 等<之二>[/quote] 问好月光，谢谢加精，向你好诗学习，远握。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2007-01-05 12:37:35 Post subject:

好。看到喜欢的了。不是对其他高手不敬，口味问题。时下常见好诗常看得人眼花头晕。其实想象力最便宜。写得有根，有出处，有感情才好。个人在不同阶段喜欢过不同的，最后喜欢的是布宁。安静，但让人内心受震。北方好。喜欢这种调子。都是瞎说。我自己不行，还没过自己这关就停了。看到你的就更不想重新开始写了。有几个黑蚂蚁大小的人。。。匆匆远行，似有瑕。肯定是看不到匆匆的，但可以推断，也讲得过去。但失去了遥远的感觉。我写过类似的，用的是极为缓慢，也有不足。不知怎样才能让人体会到，似慢慢，实匆匆。

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Posted: 2007-01-05 21:40:38 Post subject:

细读，回味无穷。欣赏了~

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Posted: 2008-01-01 03:42:49 Post subject:

飞雪春风又一度, 新朋老友何日归? 遥祝新年快乐

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Posted: 2008-01-02 02:05:11 Post subject:

小的比长的好.问好! _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

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