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《梧桐树》
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PostPosted: 2007-11-10 08:01:54    Post subject: 《梧桐树》 Reply with quote

每夜,我被同样的喜悦惊醒:一个由来已久的
愿望,总有一天,我的下半生,要化为一棵树。
——深吸一口气,双手的枝条托举阳光,风中,
手臂的叶子唰唰做响;脚的根须向下伸展,触
摸大地深处泉水唱的一支歌。

无话可说。甚至把自己算进去,所有的树,要
变,就变成一棵梧桐。在我居住的城市,只有
它,树冠丰茂,腰杆挺拔,根系发达。虽然它
无法走动,但它活得比我精彩。

有一天,树与树之间多了一个坑:一定是一棵
幸运的树,将被移植在这里。我要抢在它前面,
告诉家人,出门向右,第五棵,是我。我悄然
挨近,想验证瞬间的神奇,一不留神,一头跌
了进去。

土坑迅速弥合。一刹那,我闷闷地憋了一口气。
彻骨的凉意透过来,伸手不见五指。双腿,在
空中摆动,脚趾的叶片在风中瑟瑟发抖。我栽
进土坑,我的下半生,作为一棵树,就这样深
深地倒立在土坑。

07.10.22,草。10.23.改定。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-12 01:48:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

想象丰富。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-06 02:10:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

樱花听雨 wrote:
想象丰富。


谢谢版主的评阅。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-10 23:20:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

有风格,有特点,学习!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 22:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

庄周梦见蝴蝶,你是梦见了梧桐树呵 Laughing
很好的思路!欣赏 Laughing
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