曹东 童生
Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 37 Location: 中国 曹东Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-26 11:18:49 Post subject: 锯 |
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锯
曹东
正如江河无情地锯着大地
时间,终于锯进了我的骨头
慢些,再慢一些
我的手要伸向哪里
才能像婴儿,得到一点抚摸 _________________ 我的主页http://blog.sina.com.cn/caod |
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戴玨 秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007 Posts: 808
戴玨Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-01 08:52:45 Post subject: |
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沉痛的詩! _________________ I labour by singing light
我的blog
我的專欄 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-01 12:36:01 Post subject: |
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我的手要伸向哪里
才能像婴儿,得到一点抚摸 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-01 15:58:50 Post subject: |
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| 曹东的诗歌很有感觉. 提 |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-01 17:04:59 Post subject: |
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| 不错 |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-01 20:07:36 Post subject: |
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提。有点独特之处---- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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了因大兄 秀才
Joined: 15 Nov 2006 Posts: 209
了因大兄Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-01-02 11:32:44 Post subject: |
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正如江河无情地锯着大地
时间,终于锯进了我的骨头
欣赏,问好~ |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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