风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2007-11-24 10:54:58 Post subject: |
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短小精悍,令人感触的佳作。。。 |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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马东旭 童生
Joined: 13 Oct 2007 Posts: 98
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Posted: 2007-11-25 11:32:23 Post subject: |
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精悍,短小精悍,语言别具一格,我喜欢第一小节 _________________ 我的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1136876147
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-25 11:35:32 Post subject: 感觉不错 |
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灵动的诗歌 问好 _________________ 莞君 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-25 20:38:07 Post subject: |
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莞君, 马东旭, 海军, 风动, 子花, 白琳, 谢谢你们的鼓励. 庆红, 谢谢你的诗歌. 我会珍藏的. |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-22 18:36:30 Post subject: |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-22 20:02:24 Post subject: |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-24 09:11:39 Post subject: |
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PEACE, 我漂亮的梅花谁给扔了  |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2007-12-24 10:21:30 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
PEACE, 我漂亮的梅花谁给扔了  |
right, I come back to look at it once more, but gone. I contributed to it, i want it back too!
I think you might have to re-post it.
anyway, leaving work, merry christmas to all of you guys! _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-12-24 11:08:06 Post subject: |
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找到了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-24 13:20:22 Post subject: |
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nobody wrote: |
白水 Moonlight wrote: |
PEACE, 我漂亮的梅花谁给扔了  |
right, I come back to look at it once more, but gone. I contributed to it, i want it back too!
I think you might have to re-post it.
anyway, leaving work, merry christmas to all of you guys! |
不要对我说你还在OFFICE, 现在是圣诞夜.
梅花找到了. 谢谢你昨天的指导, 比我自己刚开始作的好多了.
祝圣诞快乐.  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-24 13:21:46 Post subject: |
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谢谢你, 辛苦了 |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-26 10:22:15 Post subject: |
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空灵 有味的一个 欣赏了 问好 _________________ 莞君 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-27 10:40:05 Post subject: |
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莞君 wrote: |
空灵 有味的一个 欣赏了 问好 |
问好莞君 |
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