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&&& 寂寞进行时（三首）

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-20 05:27:16 Post subject: &&& 寂寞进行时（三首）

&&& 寂寞进行时（三首）文/山城子 & 一个人吸烟唐诗宋词的作者们都不吸烟他们吸很干净的空气在阳光被劫持的日子里有人寂寞在小屋里独自吸牌子是“长征” 意念到万水千山到萧瑟秋风今又是到已是悬崖百丈冰到1976年……弥漫处马车狂奔而来鞭子高悬谁被甩下阴沟头破血流谁一任颠簸抓住车辕我弹弹烟灰车是刹不住了谁盗走了一马平川 2007-12-17 & 一个人喝茶只喝不品一口再一口先苦后甜谁家的日子把炉盖半敞不让火旺有些事情不能荒唐阿房宫是我们自己烧的圆明园毁于开门揖盗秦皇一炬百家书颦儿泪焚生命的诗稿钻木取火是祖先发明的现代人只强权导弹创造散沙一片中东徒炸人体石油树呀长得太高太茂添煤助燃准备做饭泼掉残茶等待平安夜半 2007-12-19 & 一个人饮酒窗外没有明月一杯只与一个自己相约没氛围不担心过量空饮睡前轻飘散落如雪来吧一小口一小口许多词语在眼前摇曳没了单位常觉流离失所聚餐的日子沉淀不解张张鲜亮淋漓晃过颜色纷纷凋谢天天坐在家里飘泊许多码头旗帜猎猎夜夜搁浅在鲜花村有个老头儿傻笑着迎接 2007-12-19 通讯：561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校李德贵

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-21 08:22:29 Post subject:

不错的一组, 提. 老师节日快乐.

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-21 16:14:38 Post subject:

喜欢第一首。问候山城子诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-21 23:29:54 Post subject:

谢谢白水！谢谢海军！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-22 00:39:46 Post subject:

我最喜欢的就是这样的寂寞！！问好老师！

燕庄生铁
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Posted: 2007-12-22 02:57:49 Post subject:

有一种老到的味道，好功力

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-22 04:39:22 Post subject:

肯定是妻回娘家了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-23 02:32:32 Post subject:

谢谢子花！谢谢燕庄生铁！谢谢nobody！祝朋友们圣诞快乐！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-26 10:27:09 Post subject:

欣赏了纯熟的一组提 _________________ 莞君

博弈
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Posted: 2007-12-28 06:43:34 Post subject:

哈哈，何由如此？ “天天坐在家里飘泊” 好句！船牖推开，雪客曾相识不借东风问灶火烟茶酒都给留点啊呵呵新年快乐！！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-29 21:09:14 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏了纯熟的一组提

莞君新年好！

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-29 21:37:39 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

哈哈，何由如此？
“天天坐在家里飘泊” 好句！
船牖推开，雪客曾相识
不借东风问灶火
烟茶酒都给留点啊呵呵

新年快乐！！

不是赋闲了吗？就上网呗！
贵州的烟茶酒都是一流的真啊！
且用也用不完的！
祝先生新年幸福安康！

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