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并蒂莲（五首）

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Posted: 2007-12-21 04:21:01 Post subject: 并蒂莲（五首）

《并蒂莲》预报台风要来天空堆积越来越多，越来越厚的云一滴雨也没下，太阳时而出现，时而隐没，温度仍然很高荷塘，并蒂莲微微颤动举止有点暧昧，只是瞬间，蜻蜓点水般，略显害羞在微风里，若即若离；在莲叶间若隐若现 2007-8-12 《陡坡》转个弯，一个长长的大斜坡。她朝下走挺胸收腹，步子迈得大，速度很快，动作比较协调并不夸张新建的路面宽敞，她行走在中央，两旁是行人的目光如果往上走，就不这样现在是黄昏。一辆三轮车呼哧呼哧孤单地往上爬 2007-8-13 《很浓》雾很浓，八月中旬，层层叠叠的雾很浓凌晨四点的风吹来，竟有些凉意杉树、松树、樟树以及那么多不知名的树，沙啦啦地响墨绿的颜色很浓远山和近山，这个时候很朦胧再远的地方，肉眼看不见的东西，藏在很浓的东西后面它确实存在着，无法忽略站在山顶上，想着远方，在看不见的群山更远处我的忧伤很浓，真实存在着也看不见 2007-8-15 《你还年轻》你经常这样说再过10年就是50岁了明年元宵节如果谈起同样的话题，你也许还会说再过若干年，就要跨过50岁这道槛了其实，从我认识你的那一天起，就一直被我内心拒绝在40岁门外今天夜里，圆圆的月亮在窗外，特别皎洁宁静的月光，清晰地洒在你脸上你穿着那件最喜欢的红色吊带裙坐在我面前 2007-8-13 《叙说》窗外，黄昏的阳光，不知不觉消逝没有一滴从云缝里漏下并透过单薄的玻璃，在早晨翻开的书页里留个痕迹我静坐，听音乐情绪慢慢丰盈，充斥心间天色已暗预报的台风没来，周围很平静想起的一些往事，都看不见，不禁有些莫名的忧伤熟悉的脸庞，已经远去，至于模糊想说的话，没人倾听 2007-8-6

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Posted: 2007-12-21 07:31:53 Post subject:

最喜欢《叙说》

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Posted: 2007-12-21 16:27:06 Post subject:

喜欢你的诗！多来发一些你的诗吧！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-12-22 07:13:20 Post subject:

在博里读过了，再欣赏，问好阿秀～给你做了个片片，有时间找我要吧！

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Posted: 2007-12-22 21:37:08 Post subject:

《并蒂莲》写的很性感质感强

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Posted: 2007-12-23 02:26:04 Post subject:

具先锋色彩，欣赏。

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Posted: 2007-12-26 10:25:00 Post subject:

精彩的一组欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:00:41 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

最喜欢《叙说》

谢谢喜欢，新年好！

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:04:43 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

喜欢你的诗！多来发一些你的诗吧！！！

发多了，腻味啊，不好意思，努力学习中！
问新年好!

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:06:24 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

在博里读过了，再欣赏，问好阿秀～
给你做了个片片，有时间找我要吧！

什么片片啊，不是骗骗吧，哈哈，先谢谢，什么时候给我看看啊

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:07:55 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

《并蒂莲》

写的很性感

质感强

喜欢性感吗，哈哈，新年好

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:09:06 Post subject:

燕庄生铁 wrote:

具先锋色彩，欣赏。

谢谢，新年快乐！

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Posted: 2007-12-28 02:10:32 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

精彩的一组欣赏了问好

又见朋友
新年幸福！

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