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更漏子·冬夜

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-12 14:33:12 Post subject: 更漏子·冬夜

键盘闲，心绪走，枉负银屏空候。街市静，笑声休，盏灯独照楼。冬来久，月已瘦，寥落天边星斗。似叹我，近闲愁，华年如水流。（07、12、5）

晓松
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Posted: 2007-12-12 19:17:24 Post subject:

但使心中有荷梦不负华年如水流

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-12-12 19:31:02 Post subject:

冬夜闲荷梦，赋诗叹年华。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-12-13 17:03:58 Post subject:

荷梦这首词是否可作别解: 惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-12-14 07:43:20 Post subject:

欣赏．寂寥情怀跃然纸端 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-14 07:45:04 Post subject:

暗香如沁 wrote:

欣赏．寂寥情怀跃然纸端

同感. 问好荷梦

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-16 02:20:20 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

但使心中有荷梦
不负华年如水流

谢谢鼓励，无奈荷残梦无依，如何不负华年走？

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-16 02:25:36 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

冬夜闲荷梦，赋诗叹年华。

见笑了！

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-16 02:28:30 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

荷梦这首词是否可作别解:

惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头.

惭愧，谢激励！

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-12-16 02:51:19 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight 写到 wrote: 暗香如沁写到 wrote: 欣赏．寂寥情怀跃然纸端同感. 问好荷梦谢白水、暗香！问好！

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