荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-12 14:33:12 Post subject: 更漏子·冬夜 |
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键盘闲,心绪走,枉负银屏空候。
街市静,笑声休,盏灯独照楼。
冬来久,月已瘦,寥落天边星斗。
似叹我,近闲愁,华年如水流。
(07、12、5) |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2007-12-12 19:17:24 Post subject: |
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但使心中有荷梦
不负华年如水流 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2007-12-12 19:31:02 Post subject: |
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冬夜闲荷梦,赋诗叹年华。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-13 17:03:58 Post subject: |
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荷梦这首词是否可作别解:
惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-14 07:45:04 Post subject: |
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同感. 问好荷梦 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 02:20:20 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
但使心中有荷梦
不负华年如水流 |
谢谢鼓励,无奈荷残梦无依,如何不负华年走? |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 02:25:36 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
冬夜闲荷梦,赋诗叹年华。 |
见笑了!  |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 02:28:30 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
荷梦这首词是否可作别解:
惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头. |
惭愧,谢激励! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-12-16 02:51:19 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight 写到 wrote:
暗香如沁 写到 wrote:
欣赏.寂寥情怀跃然纸端
同感. 问好荷梦
谢白水、暗香!问好! |
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