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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 14:33:12    Post subject: 更漏子·冬夜 Reply with quote

键盘闲,心绪走,枉负银屏空候。
街市静,笑声休,盏灯独照楼。

冬来久,月已瘦,寥落天边星斗。
似叹我,近闲愁,华年如水流。

(07、12、5)
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:17:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

但使心中有荷梦
不负华年如水流
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PostPosted: 2007-12-12 19:31:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

冬夜闲荷梦,赋诗叹年华。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-13 17:03:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦这首词是否可作别解:

惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头.
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:43:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏.寂寥情怀跃然纸端
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~
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PostPosted: 2007-12-14 07:45:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香如沁 wrote:
欣赏.寂寥情怀跃然纸端


同感. 问好荷梦
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 02:20:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
但使心中有荷梦
不负华年如水流

谢谢鼓励,无奈荷残梦无依,如何不负华年走?
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 02:25:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
冬夜闲荷梦,赋诗叹年华。

见笑了! Embarassed
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 02:28:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
荷梦这首词是否可作别解:

惜流年,非闲愁,另有心志在心头.

惭愧,谢激励!
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-12-16 02:51:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight 写到 wrote:

暗香如沁 写到 wrote:
欣赏.寂寥情怀跃然纸端


同感. 问好荷梦

谢白水、暗香!问好!
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