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日记体诗歌试篇---20071202 收到<<雪语晴歌>> <<秋水之舸>> 等的记事

听雨不闻风
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Posted: 2007-12-03 00:02:03 Post subject: 日记体诗歌试篇---20071202 收到<<雪语晴歌>> <<秋水之舸>> 等的记事

日记体诗歌试篇---20071202 收到<<雪语晴歌>> <<秋水之舸>> 等的记事文/听雨不闻风 08:26起床时就听到了雨声想必是这雨是乘一夜冬风而来望窗外的道上伞花点点残败的叶如画家手中的色彩厚重实在的冬立在室外早餐很随便应付过去后还真忘了刷牙洗脸好在看脸的人出的门去了补点水气让隔夜的眉眼叙展 09:13敲门声引得蝴蝶犬高唱打开邮寄员递过几封邮件一册是王丽华著的<<雪语晴歌>> 一册是蔡启发著的<<秋水之舸>> 一封是广州诗社主办的<<诗词报赛能特刊>> 还有几件某大商场的推销图版 13:58看cctv11戏剧地方戏角的伴像比如今的秀们好看真的演义在比假的情义忠孝义德串在戏里苦了听戏的眼累了看戏的嘴困了的脚睡在阴了的梦里 . . . 电灯亮了再起床看到主旋律的戏又起 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/TYBWF xzbbsoxz@sina.com

南岩
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Posted: 2007-12-03 04:01:43 Post subject:

这个很独特啊! 问候 _________________ 诗观:用犀利的语言穿越人们的身躯! http://blog.sina.com.cn/nanyanfish

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-03 08:33:35 Post subject:

这样的记事方式不错～问好！

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-03 17:53:39 Post subject:

欣赏

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-03 17:57:33 Post subject:

真的不错 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

博弈
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Posted: 2007-12-04 09:35:43 Post subject:

“好在看脸的人出的门去了” 挺不错，有人把这类文体归于后现代非文学体，比方，日记体，广告体，备忘录体，等等。我看这篇还是蕴藏文学味道的。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

听雨不闻风
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Posted: 2007-12-04 16:32:46 Post subject:

感谢楼上朋文点评。初试小诗。需努力。祝好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/TYBWF xzbbsoxz@sina.com

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