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白水
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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:07:01 Post subject: <境>

<境> 低调, 再低沉至丹田阵痛, 横笛吹断桑园踏破桃红熄了深秋的柳烟心归竹苑多么想燃一支松明子点两盏茶晕就这样让我们阅读彼此的眼睛

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:09:55 Post subject:

_________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-11-26 19:16:05 Post subject:

好心态~问好月光妹妹~

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-26 20:27:59 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

PEACE, 你这是干嘛呢? Cool

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-26 20:30:28 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

好心态~问好月光妹妹~

问好月亮.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-11-26 20:53:29 Post subject:

点两盏茶晕哦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-11-27 00:05:39 Post subject:

桑园踏破桃红熄了深秋的柳烟心归竹苑 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-11-27 02:20:11 Post subject:

中间一节很美，但我不太懂，很喜欢最后一节，经典。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-11-27 03:49:25 Post subject:

干净小令啊，哈哈。阅读彼此的眼睛，学英文哪 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-27 07:43:23 Post subject:

<境> 低调, 再低沉至丹田阵痛, 横笛吹断桑园踏破桃红熄了深秋的柳烟心归竹苑多么想燃一支松明子点两盏茶晕就这样让我们阅读彼此的眼睛问好兄干净的语言沉稳的一个学习了问好 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2007-11-27 12:24:00 Post subject:

。心有灵犀　的新解　：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:34:09 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

点两盏茶晕哦

你可真够晕的

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:41:11 Post subject:

谢谢少君, KOK, 莞君. 问好

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-27 16:45:33 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

干净小令啊，哈哈。
阅读彼此的眼睛，学英文哪 Laughing

眼睛是心灵之窗, 好比这电脑银屏.
有些人心比较好, 能很耐心的给别人教英文也很好啊. Wink

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-27 17:02:10 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

中间一节很美，但我不太懂，很喜欢最后一节，经典。

桑园踏破桃红
熄了深秋的柳烟
心归竹苑
你是说这段?
桑园是蚕之所在地
桃红喻火, 也喻喧嚣的尘世.

当诗歌爱好者进入诗坛, 尘世的喧嚣自然静了, 如熄灭的火. 在深秋的柳烟里, 带着一颗宁静的心, 入竹林深处,,,,,,

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Posted: 2007-11-27 17:11:31 Post subject:

白水诗人好诗歌！！！问好！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-28 19:47:12 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

白水诗人好诗歌！！！问好！

问好海军.

彭世学
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Posted: 2007-11-29 06:22:16 Post subject:

低调, 再低沉至丹田阵痛, 横笛吹断桑园踏破桃红熄了深秋的柳烟心归竹苑诗意灵动！欣赏！！问好！！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-11-29 18:28:38 Post subject:

姐姐：按照我的想法，把前面2段，全部去掉只留下最后1段最好。

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-29 18:48:13 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

低调, 再低
沉至丹田
阵痛, 横笛吹断

桑园踏破桃红
熄了深秋的柳烟
心归竹苑
诗意灵动！欣赏！！问好！！！

谢谢世学.

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