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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 10:40:43    Post subject: 赠诗 Reply with quote

赵福治

天将雪
未雪
来来来,哥俩来
研究一把中国
传统文化吧,就先
从酒开始——
话说来长,且先慢用白家
新醅的
绿蚁,几颗青梅
囫囵一声
下去,一股豪情油然
直撞丹田,直惊起
一行白鹭七只,你看
那领头的
可是李大仙人
梦游天姥归来——
千年小别
酒气不减 那年呀
快快快,将进酒
酒家
我的千金裘呢
天说黑
就黑
前程雪野
千里,我的五花马呢
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 11:08:35    Post subject: Reply with quote



鼓掌 支持 :0

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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 11:11:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

KOK回来了, 这个笔名可是真不好写, 看PEACE的高招了.加油 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 13:23:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho

叫兄弟的两声
叫哥哥的,只是婉婉的
一转
什么叫千媚的酒窝
我们暂且
压在心头,人家说 话逢知己
我说酒醉千杯
都醉不过
胸怀的那一樽
黄土烧结的壶口
醉,都醉不过
你眼底的 那两汪
酒泉,斜斜的西出了阳关
你再也寻不着
青青的柳色,叫兄弟的
两声,我只听到
潇潇的马嘶
冲破天尽头的孤烟
直愣愣地升腾
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 14:48:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, PEACE的醉拳打的真够醉. KOK,你的少林禅拳的真功夫能给我们SHOW一下吗? 有了"大漠孤烟直, " 要和"长河落日圆"呵 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 15:40:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

KOK. 临屏草和一个, 见笑:

<KOKHO>

尝试着发声
"KOK"
难免想起泣血的杜鹃
布谷本应在春季
而你却偏偏
鸣在深秋

好奇的随你挪步
西天,合什, 参禅
木鱼儿敲醒了长眠的河

大漠那边
香炉紫雾, 落日
正圆
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 16:45:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

木鱼儿敲醒了长眠的河

精彩
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 18:49:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

晕了人家晕自己:

《如鱼得水》

意思是
天上的小鸟,是被大风扬起的叶子
或者说,叶子,是顺着阳光漂下来的鱼
从春天游过夏天
突然撞上一棵秋天的大树

只要有足够的耐心
缘木求鱼,也并非办不到的事
我这么想着,一不小心
撞上了另一种树

我是说
人是不是另一种
移动着的树呢

但不会是鱼吧
除了天上掉下来的
或者水里冒出来的
美女

也不该是鸟吧
在我长出翅膀之前
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 19:17:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

晕了自己晕人家:

够晕_悟空OR鱼?

HI, 我说
诗人
没长翅膀的你
没准真和花果山的猴王有缘
文昌鱼儿
从瑶池放生了蟠桃
蟾蜍的云袖
撕成了婴儿的尿片*
拧一片云彩 洒
黄梅秋雨
醉了鱼儿分不清碧海蓝天

愿上天快快掉下个美女
观音菩萨
快收了这猴
在他长出翅膀之前

*参见和平岛大作
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 19:23:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

天上掉美女的概率很小哦
害我白等了
好几个晚上

我想,如果我也能像李太白那样
骑鲸,四海的漫游
白水,白水
给我变出一条
美人鱼

或者骑鹤 满天飞
没准能摘上
一丁半点的星星

它们为什么
总眨巴眼睛

月亮的嘴巴
圆了
又上弯,下弯
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 19:34:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

想要星星?
THAT IS EASY
请教那位
射落九个太阳的后生

我说PEACE
你可想气死李白?
他举杯邀月

张弓搭箭

弓的弦
圆了 又弯
漫天的流星雨
是你今夜的无眠

Very Happy Very Happy

别忘记捂好脑袋哦
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 19:39:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

最后的太阳

九个太阳都射下来了
我是不是可以
歇一歇

瞅着第十个太阳

摇摇欲坠的冬天
眯缝成天际的
最后一根血丝
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PostPosted: 2007-11-18 19:46:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

我先缴枪吧. 今天和诗不在状态, 写不好Embarassed
你自己把脑袋包扎好 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 09:40:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

.

白水 我是 ko kho

你老是说 kok 好像是公鸡似的 :)

我是 许晓辉 。。。

《1》来一点 正事, 出版一完 我们的诗人 就跑的光光。。 tmd 也太现实啦。

《2》我要带12个网友过来,希望他们的网速没问题。。

《3》如果有问题,hpd 你去找找 加拿大 中国大使馆的文化参赞,
。 说说你们网速的问题,这些国家拿钱的文人 来得没问题,其他网友都有问题。
。 网通的有问题,中电的也有问题。。 不应该是这样。

《4》拿那些,加拿大总理 写的介绍信、推荐信 对你有好处!

《5》请hpd开一个 “现代诗歌讲习交流班” 的版面

就在那个 谈古论今的后面 :) 那个版面 有我准备的讲义、练习题、解答。。

作业 都发表到现代诗版面,看来人气,我们几个老将,来从头做起!
lake, 白水 都来帮忙哟。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 09:50:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

ko kho, 要开讲现代诗歌呀
我来给你开哦
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 09:58:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, 那我一定当个好学生. 好好听课. Very Happy

KO KHO. 再也不KOK了, 今天再试着发音感觉倒象咳嗽的小刺猥 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-11-20 10:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote



谢谢 hpd Smile

白水 那个发生 就像 Coco 一样哟。。

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