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印痕（组诗）

蓝桥
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蓝桥Collection

Posted: 2006-11-29 23:33:37 Post subject: 印痕（组诗）

印痕远处传来魔鬼诱惑的歌声权杖下飘满灵魂弯曲的倒影命定地，你不能匍匐地进入是幸还是不幸这是两条不同的门经每当心口滴血舔伤痛的午夜时分又回到当初月季和夜莺的田园命定地，你不能诗意地沉醉是幸还是不幸传说的伊甸甸正经消失魔鬼的歌声在寂静处强动生命的胸膛内有两股绞杀的力量对峙、沉默在蓝色的火苗中烙不悲剧的印山行这些年在石头夹缝中做梦梦见石头和石头碰响音乐抚摸石头这命运坚硬的前额你脚踝渗出的滴滴鲜红结成霜花如盐浸透歌哭人生青涩的雨季褪去也有几枚小红果装饰一片山林的荣耀梦，还在山那边你只能背对惊慕的眼神扼守智者撑起一面蓝色的心做帷帐守护耸涌的灵魂花脚蚊子被挡在外面营营嗡嗡地畅想金库守门人相对着迷惑：灵魂是什么形状岂可扼守智者双手合十：阿门，你早已失窃果核被钉子固定在墙上它是一枚坚硬的果核枯皱且暗黄在另一片想象的空间它透明如蝉翼呈现翩翩若飞的形状沿着风的预言朝看不见的幻境翘望苦涩的外壳在温湿的空气里软化、腐烂穿透一切的只有时间、意志和阳光迷途守着你的睡眠像守着疲倦的风敛起它透明羽翼想象你在城市的霓虹灯影中穿行，身姿柔弱而单薄仿佛瞬间会在五光十色中走失醇酒醉了红颜也醉了我的怜惜灯红酒绿的怪兽正张开猩红的双唇子夜破碎的心口一声深长的叹气伴随着无奈当时辰守护着你的睡眠迷失的风在身旁宁静你，轻轻盈握于掌心我的手指抚过渐渐舒展的羽翼

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2006-11-30 19:08:28 Post subject:

蓝桥的诗歌, 或柔或韧都透着古典的美

漂之雨
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Joined: 01 Dec 2006
Posts: 53

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Posted: 2006-12-01 08:50:13 Post subject: 问好蓝桥君！

您的诗作追求完美，意境和语境非常融洽．学习！

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2006-12-01 17:55:51 Post subject:

思想和抒情很完美地结合到一起学习 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2006-12-01 23:40:18 Post subject:

每一首都那样耐品,学习了，问好~

蓝桥
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 105

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Posted: 2006-12-03 07:00:29 Post subject:

谢楼上的几位关注评读!

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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Posted: 2006-12-03 09:02:20 Post subject:

品之有味。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2006-12-06 05:27:11 Post subject:

蓝桥很有天赋，阳光一样明亮。他现在正经历苦难，让我们一起为他祝福。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

墨染红颜
童生

Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69

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Posted: 2006-12-06 05:38:12 Post subject:

有人说磨难出诗人，真的是吗？祈祷蓝桥早日挥别魔杖，再读你的新作。 _________________ 风花飞有态，烟絮坠无痕。

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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Posted: 2006-12-06 08:43:48 Post subject:

今日读之有更深感悟。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

了因大兄
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Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 209

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Posted: 2006-12-06 18:43:57 Post subject:

内敛而富有张力。 _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
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Posted: 2006-12-18 00:37:46 Post subject:

有思想深度和灵魂扣问的抒情。握手 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

鹤雨
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 113
Location: 上海
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Posted: 2006-12-26 09:04:20 Post subject:

问好,握手! _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

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