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来个搞笑的
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:01:45    Post subject: 来个搞笑的 Reply with quote

《山外有山》

有佛的
五根手指
在写诗
三个筋斗
到此一游
落款:一泡尿
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余音绕耳
余香绕梁

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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:05:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

熏死佛了,大不敬~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:11:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水不敢来玩了
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:16:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

晕死佛爷
Cool Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:24:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

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白水不敢来玩了
Laughing

你把白水妹妹得罪了,喊不来了?!Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:27:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

余香绕梁

鼻梁的意思
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 17:35:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,白水妹妹躲远点~让岛自己一个人绕吧~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 18:58:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

《山外有山》 ,对
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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 20:28:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
晕死佛爷
Cool Embarassed


改为“熏死”好些吧?
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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 20:45:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

《天外有天》

有牛的
一张脸皮
在胡说
不可以死
不可不死
不可诈死
签名:某诗人
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自杀之声
不绝于耳


《山外有山》

有佛的
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在写诗
金箍肉棒
三个筋斗
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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 21:42:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

从昨天你就变猴子了啊Smile

自杀之声
不绝于耳


我绝不会自杀,我还没活够呢Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-10-09 22:14:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

闹腾呀
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PostPosted: 2007-10-10 02:42:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

在等妳的时候
我写了点东西

视野, 树叶, 生长后又飘落
生命是借贷, 生长有一些醒悟
摊还岁月, 我只能把一些悄悄留下

树叶飘逰在秋风里
划过枯木的, 如提琴的弓
你还泡在浴缸, 如一叶小舟

木质沉重. 你在我的脑海
我还等着妳, 一起去吃点东西
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PostPosted: 2007-10-10 08:16:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
在等妳的时候
我写了点东西

视野, 树叶, 生长后又飘落
生命是借贷, 生长有一些醒悟
摊还岁月, 我只能把一些悄悄留下

树叶飘逰在秋风里
划过枯木的, 如提琴的弓
你还泡在浴缸, 如一叶小舟

木质沉重. 你在我的脑海
我还等着妳, 一起去吃点东西


这一首写得比较正式,也富于想象,很美,第二段有生命的思考,结尾有余味~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-10 08:25:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
在等妳的时候
我写了点东西

视野, 树叶, 生长后又飘落
生命是借贷, 生长有一些醒悟
摊还岁月, 我只能把一些悄悄留下

树叶飘逰在秋风里
划过枯木的, 如提琴的弓
你还泡在浴缸, 如一叶小舟

木质沉重. 你在我的脑海
我还等着妳, 一起去吃点东西


很有质感
精彩
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