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来个搞笑的

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:01:45 Post subject: 来个搞笑的

《山外有山》有佛的五根手指在写诗三个筋斗到此一游落款：一泡尿感叹号问号句号省略号余音绕耳余香绕梁

我是明月
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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:05:58 Post subject:

熏死佛了,大不敬~ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/wuxuhong

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:11:05 Post subject:

白水不敢来玩了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:16:22 Post subject:

晕死佛爷 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:24:53 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水不敢来玩了

你把白水妹妹得罪了，喊不来了?! Smile

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:27:57 Post subject:

余香绕梁鼻梁的意思 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 17:35:28 Post subject:

哈哈,白水妹妹躲远点~让岛自己一个人绕吧~

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Posted: 2007-10-08 18:58:26 Post subject:

《山外有山》 ,对 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-10-09 20:28:35 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

晕死佛爷

改为“熏死”好些吧？
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Posted: 2007-10-09 20:45:34 Post subject:

《天外有天》有牛的一张脸皮在胡说不可以死不可不死不可诈死签名：某诗人感叹号问号句号省略号自杀之声不绝于耳《山外有山》有佛的五根手指在写诗金箍肉棒三个筋斗到此一游落款：一泡尿感叹号问号句号省略号余音绕耳余香绕梁 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 21:42:51 Post subject:

从昨天你就变猴子了啊自杀之声不绝于耳我绝不会自杀,我还没活够呢

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Posted: 2007-10-09 22:14:26 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-10-10 02:42:41 Post subject:

在等妳的时候我写了点东西视野, 树叶, 生长后又飘落生命是借贷, 生长有一些醒悟摊还岁月, 我只能把一些悄悄留下树叶飘逰在秋风里划过枯木的, 如提琴的弓你还泡在浴缸, 如一叶小舟木质沉重. 你在我的脑海我还等着妳, 一起去吃点东西 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:16:00 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

在等妳的时候
我写了点东西

视野, 树叶, 生长后又飘落
生命是借贷, 生长有一些醒悟
摊还岁月, 我只能把一些悄悄留下

树叶飘逰在秋风里
划过枯木的, 如提琴的弓
你还泡在浴缸, 如一叶小舟

木质沉重. 你在我的脑海
我还等着妳, 一起去吃点东西

这一首写得比较正式，也富于想象，很美，第二段有生命的思考，结尾有余味～

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Posted: 2007-10-10 08:25:02 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

很有质感
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