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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 13:05:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 13:17:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
新生的眸子
-----献给我新生的女儿的

作者:shine

这是两撢清澈的深井
她将其中的一只睁开
很快又合上

我看见自己的倒影
被关在里面

好像她真的看清楚了
这存在了二十天的世界

谢谢shine的分享
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congrats!! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 13:19:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

新生的眸子
-----献给我新生的女儿的

作者:shine

这是两撢清澈的深井
她将其中的一只睁开
很快又合上

我看见自己的倒影
被关在里面

好像她真的看清楚了
这存在了二十天的世界

谢谢shine的分享


就这个写得最好~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 13:51:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

http://web.wenxuecity.com/BBSList.php?SubID=poetry

shine的《新生的眸子》是别处的,不是临屏
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:29:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

《山外有山》

有佛的
五根手指
在写诗
三个筋斗
到此一游
落款:一泡尿
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:46:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

《李白●送友人》新解


《青山横北郭,白水绕东城》

青山是我的大哥
白水是我的妹仔

从北郭
到东城
也只是一丈之遥
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:48:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

《此地一为别,孤蓬万里征》

一丈之遥呀呀
何言万里
何言孤蓬
何言一别
一别之后,我如何用脚
一步一步地
丈量
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:52:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

《浮云游子意,落日故人情》

太阳有多大
你说,它这么一掉下去
连一声都不啃
就溅起
就溅起来了
漫天的浮云
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:56:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

《挥手自兹去,萧萧班马鸣》

只挥一挥手
(原来是李白先挥的手)
西天的云里
便传来
萧萧的马鸣
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:01:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

不过关~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:02:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
不过关~ Very Happy


把白大小姐请来
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
《花落知多少》

那么多漂亮的女孩子
纷纷掉下来
我连一个
也没接住!


肯定有人怀里揣多了,分配不公啊!问一下《北美枫》的男诗人,揣多了的自己报名。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:13:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

《青山横北郭,白水绕东城》

山不再转
水不再流

她解开白手绢
他摘下青头巾

郭北,城东
仿佛就在昨天
Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:16:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
《花落知多少》

那么多漂亮的女孩子
纷纷掉下来
我连一个
也没接住!


肯定有人怀里揣多了,分配不公啊!问一下《北美枫》的男诗人,揣多了的自己报名。


是呀
这里的美女多
但帅哥更多呀
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

《此地一为别,孤蓬万里征》

仿佛就在此地
水呀你慢一点流
别说孤蓬万里
千里的江陵
也不过是 一日的回程
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:39:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

《浮云游子意,落日故人情》

太阳
咕咚的一声
就推翻了
漫天的情海
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:50:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

《挥手自兹去,萧萧班马鸣》

马最通人意,因它
顺着手指的
五线谱
发音
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:54:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

放到一起:


《李白●送友人》新解


《青山横北郭,白水绕东城》

山不再转
水不再流

白手绢换青头巾

仿佛就在昨日


《此地一为别,孤蓬万里征》

此门,水呀
你慢点流
别说孤蓬万里
千里的江陵
也不过是 一日的回程


《浮云游子意,落日故人情》

太阳
咕咚的一声
卷起
千堆情


《挥手自兹去,萧萧班马鸣》

马最通人意,因它
踩着五指
的线谱
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:05:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

《雪雁》

雪化了
露出一身
水草润泽的羽
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:23:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

看过了,白水怎么还不来?请她来和~
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