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和平岛现场表演：古韵翻新

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Posted: 2007-10-08 13:05:35 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-10-08 13:17:10 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

新生的眸子
-----献给我新生的女儿的

作者：shine

这是两撢清澈的深井
她将其中的一只睁开
很快又合上

我看见自己的倒影
被关在里面

好像她真的看清楚了
这存在了二十天的世界

谢谢shine的分享
Very Happy

congrats!! Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-10-08 13:19:10 Post subject:

新生的眸子 -----献给我新生的女儿的作者：shine 这是两撢清澈的深井她将其中的一只睁开很快又合上我看见自己的倒影被关在里面好像她真的看清楚了这存在了二十天的世界谢谢shine的分享就这个写得最好～

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Posted: 2007-10-08 13:51:37 Post subject:

http://web.wenxuecity.com/BBSList.php?SubID=poetry shine的《新生的眸子》是别处的，不是临屏 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 14:29:54 Post subject:

《山外有山》有佛的五根手指在写诗三个筋斗到此一游落款：一泡尿 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 14:46:48 Post subject:

《李白●送友人》新解《青山横北郭，白水绕东城》青山是我的大哥白水是我的妹仔从北郭到东城也只是一丈之遥 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 14:48:42 Post subject:

《此地一为别，孤蓬万里征》一丈之遥呀呀何言万里何言孤蓬何言一别一别之后，我如何用脚一步一步地丈量 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 14:52:12 Post subject:

《浮云游子意，落日故人情》太阳有多大你说，它这么一掉下去连一声都不啃就溅起就溅起来了漫天的浮云 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 14:56:36 Post subject:

《挥手自兹去，萧萧班马鸣》只挥一挥手（原来是李白先挥的手）西天的云里便传来萧萧的马鸣 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:01:03 Post subject:

不过关～

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:02:06 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

不过关～

把白大小姐请来

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:09:26 Post subject:

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《花落知多少》

那么多漂亮的女孩子
纷纷掉下来
我连一个
也没接住！

肯定有人怀里揣多了，分配不公啊！问一下《北美枫》的男诗人，揣多了的自己报名。
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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:13:57 Post subject:

《青山横北郭，白水绕东城》山不再转水不再流她解开白手绢他摘下青头巾郭北，城东仿佛就在昨天 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:16:19 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

《花落知多少》

那么多漂亮的女孩子
纷纷掉下来
我连一个
也没接住！

肯定有人怀里揣多了，分配不公啊！问一下《北美枫》的男诗人，揣多了的自己报名。

是呀
这里的美女多
但帅哥更多呀
Wink

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:26:05 Post subject:

《此地一为别，孤蓬万里征》仿佛就在此地水呀你慢一点流别说孤蓬万里千里的江陵也不过是一日的回程 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:39:36 Post subject:

《浮云游子意，落日故人情》太阳咕咚的一声就推翻了漫天的情海 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:50:08 Post subject:

《挥手自兹去，萧萧班马鸣》马最通人意，因它顺着手指的五线谱发音 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 15:54:49 Post subject:

放到一起：《李白●送友人》新解《青山横北郭，白水绕东城》山不再转水不再流白手绢换青头巾仿佛就在昨日《此地一为别，孤蓬万里征》此门，水呀你慢点流别说孤蓬万里千里的江陵也不过是一日的回程《浮云游子意，落日故人情》太阳咕咚的一声卷起千堆情《挥手自兹去，萧萧班马鸣》马最通人意，因它踩着五指的线谱 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 16:05:12 Post subject:

《雪雁》雪化了露出一身水草润泽的羽 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-08 16:23:04 Post subject:

看过了，白水怎么还不来？请她来和~

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