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<月光>
白水
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PostPosted: 2006-10-02 20:06:35    Post subject: <月光> Reply with quote

<月光>

或许, 只是古墓的幽灵
一缕恋生的死亡
或许, 只是荒漠的云彩
一缕干涸的琼浆
或许, 那什么都不是
只是宇宙的苍白
在秋凉的夜晚
为你
留下一缕遗忘
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PostPosted: 2006-10-02 20:19:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

或许, 那什么都不是
只是宇宙的苍白
在秋凉的夜晚
为你
留下一缕遗忘........运笔自如,多来交流.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-10-03 05:06:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢, 尽量
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 04:05:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

blue moon
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 04:21:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

只是宇宙的苍白
在秋凉的夜晚
为你
留下一缕遗忘

<.> 拜读 。。。

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 15:27:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有张力,哲思灵动,诗图具佳,问好、学习、远握。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 17:31:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 17:42:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的白描总是这么精湛. Very Happy
问好
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 17:53:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

刘雨萍 wrote:
你的白描总是这么精湛. Very Happy
问好


问好雨萍, 这是去年来此网站临屏随笔的第一首诗歌. 10.02 Embarassed
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 20:25:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的,一蓝一闪一勾,就勾出了我过去写的:

《月亮》

童年描出的晶莹幻想

穿过云烟……

就是瘦瘦的弓背
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 20:50:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的,一蓝一闪一勾,就勾出了我过去写的:

《月亮》

童年描出的晶莹幻想

穿过云烟……

就是瘦瘦的弓背


这首到是哲理, 清灵.很不错的小诗. 说实在话, 我最怕短诗, 不是写的没内涵, 就是写的象格言. Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 22:19:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人心生幻想的诗!问候诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2007-10-04 18:37:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢海军
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 04:32:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的,一蓝一闪一勾,就勾出了我过去写的:

《月亮》

童年描圆的幻想

穿过云烟……

就是瘦瘦的弓背

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