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<月光>

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-02 20:06:35 Post subject: <月光>

<月光> 或许, 只是古墓的幽灵一缕恋生的死亡或许, 只是荒漠的云彩一缕干涸的琼浆或许, 那什么都不是只是宇宙的苍白在秋凉的夜晚为你留下一缕遗忘

赵福治
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Posted: 2006-10-02 20:19:38 Post subject:

或许, 那什么都不是只是宇宙的苍白在秋凉的夜晚为你留下一缕遗忘........运笔自如,多来交流.

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-03 05:06:45 Post subject:

谢谢, 尽量

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-02 04:21:21 Post subject:

只是宇宙的苍白在秋凉的夜晚为你留下一缕遗忘 <.> 拜读。。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-10-02 15:27:51 Post subject:

很有张力，哲思灵动，诗图具佳，问好、学习、远握。

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Posted: 2007-10-02 17:31:27 Post subject:

谢谢各位朋友. 问好

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Posted: 2007-10-02 17:42:59 Post subject:

你的白描总是这么精湛. 问好 _________________ 隔海抒情

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-02 17:53:06 Post subject:

刘雨萍 wrote:

你的白描总是这么精湛. Very Happy

问好

问好雨萍, 这是去年来此网站临屏随笔的第一首诗歌. 10.02 Embarassed

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-03 20:25:12 Post subject:

白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的，一蓝一闪一勾，就勾出了我过去写的：《月亮》童年描出的晶莹幻想穿过云烟…… 就是瘦瘦的弓背 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-03 20:50:17 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的，一蓝一闪一勾，就勾出了我过去写的：

《月亮》

童年描出的晶莹幻想

穿过云烟……

就是瘦瘦的弓背

这首到是哲理, 清灵.很不错的小诗. 说实在话, 我最怕短诗, 不是写的没内涵, 就是写的象格言. Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-10-03 22:19:07 Post subject:

让人心生幻想的诗！问候诗人！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-04 18:37:01 Post subject:

谢谢海军

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-05 04:32:57 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

白水的月亮蓝蓝的弯弯的闪闪的，一蓝一闪一勾，就勾出了我过去写的：

《月亮》

童年描圆的幻想

穿过云烟……

就是瘦瘦的弓背

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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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