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《感中秋》
晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 19:51:20    Post subject: 《感中秋》 Reply with quote

曾记儿时坐膝前,
手中月饼比月圆。
外公讲述月中事,
耳听嘴嚼心里甜。

而今月饼已成方,
眼望明月黯神伤。
外公早已成仙逝,
记忆长留梦里香。
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jemmy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 20:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

想到那么远,外公......
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 20:39:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

HI, 谁让你尽忙赚钱了, 我们今天可是把思乡全扔到湖里了. Very Happy

问好
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白云闲人
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 12:47:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松兄,好个"心里甜,梦里香"感情淳厚的诗章!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 17:04:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

望月怀远,黯然神伤,晓松是性情中人,问好。
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 19:42:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
想到那么远,外公......


谢jemmy关注,节日问候!
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 20:01:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
晓松兄,好个"心里甜,梦里香"感情淳厚的诗章!


谢白云兄赏评。儿时觉得世界特别美好,尤其是老人讲那些月亮的传说,特别引人入胜,深深地印在脑海里,终生不忘。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 20:17:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
望月怀远,黯然神伤,晓松是性情中人,问好。


谢黄兄。望月想起了童年,有感而发。
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 20:28:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
HI, 谁让你尽忙赚钱了, 我们今天可是把思乡全扔到湖里了. Very Happy

问好


同样问好!记得你说过,无欲心如水,有营事如麻,昨晚确实挤不出时间。你们高兴我就快活,代问查理好!
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征尘载袖
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 07:01:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

赐与绡痕泪半方,杯中垂月易成伤。向人自有深藏意,一掬芙蓉一掬香。

^_^
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 16:27:23    Post subject: 写得好 Reply with quote

晓松老弟:
《感中秋》写得好,写出真实情感.也可看出您是一个有孝敬心的人,值得学习.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 17:36:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

征尘载袖 wrote:
赐与绡痕泪半方,杯中垂月易成伤。向人自有深藏意,一掬芙蓉一掬香。

^_^


谢征尘载袖雅和,迟复为歉,问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 17:52:32    Post subject: Re: 写得好 Reply with quote

龙图珍 wrote:
晓松老弟:
《感中秋》写得好,写出真实情感.也可看出您是一个有孝敬心的人,值得学习.


问候龙图珍老师!平时多保重,闲时多上北枫网。
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