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《感中秋》

晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-25 19:51:20 Post subject: 《感中秋》

曾记儿时坐膝前，手中月饼比月圆。外公讲述月中事，耳听嘴嚼心里甜。而今月饼已成方，眼望明月黯神伤。外公早已成仙逝，记忆长留梦里香。

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jemmy
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Posted: 2007-09-25 20:30:21 Post subject:

想到那么远,外公...... _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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Posted: 2007-09-25 20:39:48 Post subject:

HI, 谁让你尽忙赚钱了, 我们今天可是把思乡全扔到湖里了. 问好

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白云闲人
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Posted: 2007-09-26 12:47:31 Post subject:

晓松兄,好个"心里甜,梦里香"感情淳厚的诗章! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-26 17:04:44 Post subject:

望月怀远，黯然神伤，晓松是性情中人，问好。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-26 19:42:54 Post subject:

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想到那么远,外公......

谢jemmy关注，节日问候！

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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-26 20:01:41 Post subject:

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白云闲人 wrote:

晓松兄,好个"心里甜,梦里香"感情淳厚的诗章!

谢白云兄赏评。儿时觉得世界特别美好，尤其是老人讲那些月亮的传说，特别引人入胜，深深地印在脑海里，终生不忘。

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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-26 20:17:23 Post subject:

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黄洋界 wrote:

望月怀远，黯然神伤，晓松是性情中人，问好。

谢黄兄。望月想起了童年，有感而发。

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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-26 20:28:57 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

HI, 谁让你尽忙赚钱了, 我们今天可是把思乡全扔到湖里了. Very Happy

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问好

同样问好！记得你说过，无欲心如水，有营事如麻，昨晚确实挤不出时间。你们高兴我就快活，代问查理好！

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征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-27 07:01:10 Post subject:

赐与绡痕泪半方，杯中垂月易成伤。向人自有深藏意，一掬芙蓉一掬香。 ^_^ _________________

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龙图珍
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Posted: 2007-09-27 16:27:23 Post subject: 写得好

晓松老弟: 《感中秋》写得好,写出真实情感.也可看出您是一个有孝敬心的人,值得学习.

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晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-28 17:36:09 Post subject:

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赐与绡痕泪半方，杯中垂月易成伤。向人自有深藏意，一掬芙蓉一掬香。

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谢征尘载袖雅和，迟复为歉，问好！

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Posted: 2007-09-28 17:52:32 Post subject: Re: 写得好

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龙图珍 wrote:

晓松老弟:
《感中秋》写得好,写出真实情感.也可看出您是一个有孝敬心的人,值得学习.

问候龙图珍老师！平时多保重，闲时多上北枫网。

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