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秋一个

天一黑
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Posted: 2007-09-19 19:57:15 Post subject: 秋一个

那又怎样秋落在水晶，一个光线有了家做了长亭木櫈，给每一个露珠上点一个天空一个水晶，有许多天空一个秋天有许多水晶有双忧郁的眼睛，她说，那又怎么样，世界本来就有无数天空

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-19 20:07:43 Post subject:

这首比较喜欢了. 前几首象是和大家开心

天一黑
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Posted: 2007-09-19 20:22:39 Post subject:

一直都没有进入诗态，这首也不好，是聊天聊的

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-19 20:29:29 Post subject:

那就等下一首吧

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-20 12:23:01 Post subject:

这首非常精彩。。 “每个露珠都有自己的天空” 还有哲思和多义的可能。。向白水斑竹建议能否挂起来让大家讨论？ [ 朋友一起来回贴哟。。。] 。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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