天一黑 童生
注册时间: 2007-08-30 帖子: 52
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发表于: 2007-09-11 23:11:22 发表主题: Please help to correct my poor English |
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I am a happy seed
I don’t need to look for sunshine
I don’t need to look for rain
And I don’t need to look for wind
In the spring, when I grow up, my green color will be very wonderful
In the summer, my flowers will be colorful
Butterflies will like me
Honeybees will like me
Girls will like me
Kids will like me
Ok, in the fall, I will return my fruits to them.
It is a wonderful life,
but a little boring, isn’t. |
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戴玨 秀才
注册时间: 2007-01-03 帖子: 808
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发表于: 2007-09-12 02:01:47 发表主题: |
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最後那句:
but a little boring, isn’t it? _________________ I labour by singing light
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kokho 进士出身
注册时间: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 来自: Singapore kokho北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-09-12 02:09:19 发表主题: |
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欢迎 新朋友 :)
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
注册时间: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 来自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-09-17 07:32:42 发表主题: |
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英语无大问题,只是诗的意象和立意不够“新”。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-09-17 08:51:34 发表主题: |
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I am a happy seed
I don’t need to look for sunshine
I don’t need to look for rain |
万物生长靠太阳
我家后院种的荫生植物也多多少少需要一些阳光呢。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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