天一黑
童生
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-08-30
tièzǐ: 52
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 fābiǎoyú: 2007-09-11 23:11:22 fābiǎozhùtí: Please help to correct my poor English |
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I am a happy seed
I don’t need to look for sunshine
I don’t need to look for rain
And I don’t need to look for wind
In the spring, when I grow up, my green color will be very wonderful
In the summer, my flowers will be colorful
Butterflies will like me
Honeybees will like me
Girls will like me
Kids will like me
Ok, in the fall, I will return my fruits to them.
It is a wonderful life,
but a little boring, isn’t. |
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戴玨
秀才
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-03
tièzǐ: 808
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-09-12 02:01:47 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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最後那句：
but a little boring, isn’t it?
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I labour by singing light
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我的專欄 |
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kokho
进士出身
zhùcèshíjiān: 2006-11-30
tièzǐ: 2642
láizì: Singapore
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-09-12 02:09:19 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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欢迎 新朋友 ：）
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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William Zhou周道模
探花
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-06-10
tièzǐ: 3950
láizì: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模běiměifēngwénjí |
| fābiǎoyú: 2007-09-17 07:32:42 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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英语无大问题，只是诗的意象和立意不够“新”。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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Lake
举人
zhùcèshíjiān: 2007-01-09
tièzǐ: 1286
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| fābiǎoyú: 2007-09-17 08:51:34 fābiǎozhùtí: |
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I am a happy seed
I don’t need to look for sunshine
I don’t need to look for rain |
万物生长靠太阳 
我家后院种的荫生植物也多多少少需要一些阳光呢。
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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