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忆秦娥－再赋中秋

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莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-12 18:26:01 Post subject: 忆秦娥－再赋中秋

丹桂裂，微云巧扮天边月，天边月，清辉尽照，又闻蛩咽。寻幽觅境吟词阕，笔挥古韵情飞跃，情飞跃，恰逢年少，怎言愁叠？

晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-12 19:19:10 Post subject:

“丹桂裂”，开头就不同凡响！另：寻幽觅境还是寻幽觅静？

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Posted: 2007-09-12 21:25:52 Post subject:

且将清辉照莹雪, 莫把秋心空对月问好MM

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-12 23:12:36 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

“丹桂裂”，开头就不同凡响！
另：寻幽觅境还是寻幽觅静？

谢谢晓松兄点评

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-12 23:15:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

且将清辉照莹雪, 莫把秋心空对月

问好MM

嘻嘻，好的，抛却秋心欢醉月
问好JJ Razz

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-09-13 04:41:35 Post subject:

图美词美诗心美 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-13 08:02:23 Post subject:

言愁叠，堪搔薄暮渊鱼跃。渊鱼跃，忧烦漫惹，旧游题阙。袖罗长笛如风咽，清歌一曲中秋月。中秋月，瞧人颜色，剪云缝裂。 ^_^ _________________

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-13 16:05:47 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

言愁叠，堪搔薄暮渊鱼跃。
渊鱼跃，忧烦漫惹，旧游题阙。

袖罗长笛如风咽，清歌一曲中秋月。
中秋月，瞧人颜色，剪云缝裂。

^_^

缝云裂，明眸赏尽游鱼跃，
游鱼跃，休愁去恼，畅怀书阙。

微眠入梦寒蛩咽，弄音感叹空中月，
空中月，会秋萧瑟，冷辉轻叠。

^_^

晓松
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Posted: 2007-09-13 19:18:05 Post subject:

二位唱和首尾相接，妙极！咱也试着，开心一刻：辉轻叠，迢迢云汉星活跃。星活跃，挤眉弄眼，争相望阙。忽闻人世箫声咽，前来探访窗前月。窗前月，柔情似水，抚伤补裂。

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Posted: 2007-09-13 19:47:15 Post subject:

哗,一个个都这么有才,望古兴叹,无从下手 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-13 21:52:25 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

二位唱和首尾相接，妙极！咱也试着，开心一刻：

辉轻叠，迢迢云汉星活跃。
星活跃，挤眉弄眼，争相望阙。

忽闻人世箫声咽，前来探访窗前月。
窗前月，柔情似水，抚伤补裂。

呵呵，回一首。

伤补裂，湖明秀色观鱼跃，
观鱼跃，蹙眉愁眼，独依楼阙。

妙音唱尽幽思咽，皎皎又见窗前月，
窗前月，心如净水，颂秋时节。

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-14 06:28:09 Post subject:

秋时节，香深露屑东窗月。风摇叶，都将凉意，化成呜咽。应笑寒蛩歌未阙，瘦肌吹尽阴阴跃。清音绝，自生自灭，取身名裂。 ^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-14 13:52:08 Post subject:

依韻和一個，接龍游戲就不玩了：鋪瓊屑，江風動水千山月。千山月，栖栖各地，客思長切。夢中歸路雨初歇，聲聲碎語梧桐葉。梧桐葉，曉光浮處，露珠瑩澈。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-14 18:30:22 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

秋时节，香深露屑东窗月。
风摇叶，都将凉意，化成呜咽。

应笑寒蛩歌未阙，瘦肌吹尽阴阴跃。
清音绝，自生自灭，取身名裂。

^_^

端正节，婆娑倩影歌寒月。
书红叶，低眉心意，泪飞声咽。

暗悼荷残吟数阙，楚宫身段随风跃。
言奇绝，叹怀生灭，怎牵名列？
^_^

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-14 18:49:38 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

依韻和一個，接龍游戲就不玩了：

鋪瓊屑，江風動水千山月。
千山月，栖栖各地，客思長切。

夢中歸路雨初歇，聲聲碎語梧桐葉。
梧桐葉，曉光浮處，露珠瑩澈。

谢谢，也回和一首

清輝瀉，湖明影照寒空月。
寒空月，馨芳桂意，旅居思切。

夢遊雲霧無停歇，殷殷秀色霜楓葉。
霜楓葉，伴菊幽處，露涼瑩澈。

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-15 14:20:41 Post subject:

牵名列，黄花嫩蕊成愁绝。成愁绝，趁烟思浦，绿琴琼阙。修岩霖雨劝枫红，朱颜翠发争相咽。争相咽，连年奔遂，为谁吟月？ ^_^ _________________

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-09-15 17:52:58 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

牵名列，黄花嫩蕊成愁绝。
成愁绝，趁烟思浦，绿琴琼阙。

修岩霖雨劝枫红，朱颜翠发争相咽。
争相咽，连年奔遂，为谁吟月？

^_^

谁吟月？凉霜透桂清馨绝。
清馨绝，弄音南浦，梦中琼阙。

海棠微雨醉颜红，风华年少无悲咽。
无悲咽，光阴怎逐？志踌休歇。

^_^

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Posted: 2007-09-15 23:30:22 Post subject:

微云巧扮天边月，

征尘载袖
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Posted: 2007-09-16 20:15:48 Post subject:

志休歇，而今不道黄花咽。黄花咽，倩谁传语，微章虚阙。含羞举步罗轻绝，香娇烟润黄昏月。黄昏月，独幽赋冷，嫦娥眉睫。 ^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-09-16 21:08:08 Post subject:

好词好和！寻幽觅境吟词阕，笔挥古韵情飞跃，情飞跃，恰逢年少，怎言愁叠？词美，心态更美

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