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和 <<七小姐>> 请各位为我的酒醉临屏发言哦

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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-10 00:30:46 Post subject: 和 <<七小姐>> 请各位为我的酒醉临屏发言哦

<<七小姐>> 你是老爷用一块玉换来的念想你是太太用一拄香请来的宿愿不不你是少爷我用无所事事梦来的名字七小姐你让我从此不会做任何事了不不七小姐你让我看到每一个成年的女子都产生爱意或怜惜或与才气与美色有关的猜测 [/color]声明:敬告各位诗友---本人真的不认识什么七小姐八小姐.只是对名字自做多情而已! 快而乐之-----诗人无形也. 特请七小姐见谅!赠8束玫瑰以陪罪--------- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-10 02:17:30 Post subject:

直接的爱，因爱而生疑，正常！

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-10 04:16:23 Post subject:

真不错. 接着醉

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Posted: 2007-09-10 04:43:16 Post subject:

呵呵，心动？ _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-09-10 04:47:24 Post subject:

哈哈，古色古香。七小姐，一个象征。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-09-10 05:03:51 Post subject:

望文生＂义＂～还不错，给北美枫的女士每人来一首？

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-09-10 13:57:41 Post subject:

我倒！！少君拿藕开心，也是七七得意滴~~~你开心吗？我开心。呵呵。我喜欢你喜欢我名字：） ——你名字也有故事呐：原来以为你是我武汉朋友韩少君呢，后来老和告诉说此少君非彼少君，也是一神人，^_^

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Posted: 2007-09-10 14:13:42 Post subject:

惬意愉快

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Posted: 2007-09-10 14:53:58 Post subject:

七小姐, 下一个偶像是野兽, 昨天才提到你們的詩有辨識度, 今天在此一起出現, 感覺詩就是奇妙, 再加上"少君", "闽北阿秀", 光這些名字, 都可以寫本小說了. "七小姐"三字的詩意空間挺大的, 為什麼是"七"? 聲音上, "七小姐"三字押的介音與主原音, 獨缺韻尾, 開合洪細為開,中古三等音. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2007-09-10 16:54:41 Post subject:

好！提读！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-09-11 00:05:43 Post subject:

这是七仙女下凡...

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-11 00:57:58 Post subject:

谢谢各位关注尤其谢谢七小姐的宽容其实,湖北韩少君原为荆门石化宣传部干部.很多评论湖韩的人常常引用吉韩的诗,诸如 <<无齿锯.>> 很多原打算选吉韩诗歌的选本也错选了湖韩的诗.诸如辽宁人民版的<<中国最佳诗歌选>>.把湖韩的稿费(不多,几十元钱,共有两次了)寄给了我.就这样.我为有南北俩少君而感自豪.相信湖韩亦然. 特问候祝福七小姐健康快乐,年轻美丽.让你的先生爱你之余,还有很多绅士悄悄惦记你! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

郭文沫
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Posted: 2007-09-11 03:57:10 Post subject:

古典好，赏读

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Posted: 2007-09-11 10:53:45 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

特问候祝福七小姐健康快乐,年轻美丽.让你的先生爱你之余,还有很多绅士悄悄惦记你!

哎，好奇害死猫，好色害死男人 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-09-11 11:04:51 Post subject:

这是我看过的少君最好的诗,少君呐.......我不说你也知道罗看来文学男性都有点麻烦 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-14 05:23:00 Post subject:

jemmy wrote:

这是我看过的少君最好的诗,少君呐.......我不说你也知道罗
看来文学男性都有点麻烦

郭文沫 nobody jemmy三位好! lover

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Posted: 2007-09-14 08:21:31 Post subject:

少君从没说过自己是男的呀……好奇哟

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-09-14 16:56:00 Post subject:

才看到七小姐的美貌和身材.我把"爱情" 改成"美色" 了. 本诗人这辈子算没出息了! 痴也因你狂也因你好端端一个少年学诗学剑两不成 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-14 17:26:24 Post subject:

你就损我吧你。刚回一留言，得，干脆，一并贴这儿吧。以正视听：）我就一土人儿。文字跟人两回事。我还真特随和一人，特好的脾气，勤劳勇敢加其他，现在回国内恐怕都找不到我这么好的女人嘹~~~ 这里多少哥们儿跑回来诉苦：七七，我要求也不高呀，跟你一样就凑合啦，怎么国内女孩连你都不如呢…… 我kou——！这tmd叫什嘛话！！我顿时要跟那个厮决斗，后来在座各位劝半天，那厮才醒过酒来赔小心。道歉有P用啊！伤自尊咧，走咧——！嘿嘿

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Posted: 2007-09-14 17:57:42 Post subject:

我严重警告:韩少君同志,你的问题是严重的,要离婚是绝对不行的! 还有,77是我们大家的 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

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