王国京
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Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 35
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 Posted: 2007-09-07 17:24:38 Post subject: 诗歌1首,请各位老师赐教!谢 |
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《大白菜》
饱饮秋风凉雨
成熟于霜雪中
自身的老练
用一层一层的叶子
保护了自己
不像别的菜姐妹菜兄弟
轻易的腐烂变质
如今在这个超市里
你明码标价
不和他们比色比贵
从里到外
用一颗洁白的心
体现你生命的价值
作者：王国京
地址：山东省莱芜市大桥南路19号
邮编：271100
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-09-07 17:26:57 Post subject: |
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用一颗洁白的心
体现你生命的价值
好! 此诗如此句 |
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王国京
童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 35
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| Posted: 2007-09-07 18:26:28 Post subject: 谢谢白水老师! |
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| 谢谢白水老师! |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-09-07 18:38:01 Post subject: |
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千万别称我老师. 诗歌于我只是玩儿  |
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nobody
进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2007-09-09 00:12:35 Post subject: |
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替大白菜向你表示感谢。 
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I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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王国京
童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 35
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| Posted: 2007-09-09 04:38:40 Post subject: 谢谢!nobody |
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| 问好nobody |
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