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拜新月－月夜

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Posted: 2007-08-20 18:35:30 Post subject: 拜新月－月夜

依窗见新月夜静怨鸿咽语问谁会言泣吟声悲切【拜新月】　单调二十字，四句两仄韵 ○○●○●，●●●○●。●●○●○，●○○○●。此即唐仄韵五言绝句，而语气微拗。填此词者，平仄当从之。

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Posted: 2007-08-20 19:48:08 Post subject:

MM, 高兴些. 问好

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Posted: 2007-08-21 15:47:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 高兴些. 问好

谢谢JJ，其实真正的高兴好难好难。不过我会努力，把快乐留给大家。问好

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Posted: 2007-08-21 15:49:48 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 高兴些. 问好

谢谢JJ，其实真正的高兴好难好难。不过我会努力，把快乐留给大家。问好

MM, 我知道. 但我还是希望你高兴些, 答应JJ, 好吗?

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Posted: 2007-08-21 23:27:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 我知道. 但我还是希望你高兴些, 答应JJ, 好吗?

JJ，我答应你

一定不让你为我担心

谢谢JJ关心

愿JJ时时快乐开心！

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Posted: 2007-08-23 07:04:39 Post subject:

天涯共明月，海角听呜咽。欲赋何为凭，淡然余香切。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-23 18:26:58 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

天涯共明月，海角听呜咽。欲赋何为凭，淡然余香切。

回和一首
凭栏望寒月，远处曲幽咽。妙韵丹桂迎，步闲香襟切。
Wink

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Posted: 2007-08-24 02:37:51 Post subject:

邀杯饮残月，宝瑟又张咽。正是宜唤人，共吟凄凄切。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-24 16:19:03 Post subject:

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邀杯饮残月，宝瑟又张咽。正是宜唤人，共吟凄凄切。

倾樽醉明月，暮夏怨蛩咽。此去归几时？怎留心伤切。

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Posted: 2007-08-25 05:07:34 Post subject:

香留小楼月，不蘸几分咽。促织声隐幽，满园秋歌切。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-25 16:15:56 Post subject:

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香留小楼月，不蘸几分咽。促织声隐幽，满园秋歌切。

琼楼醉新月，似有笛声咽。诉尽离念幽，引愁伤心切。

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Posted: 2007-08-25 19:12:45 Post subject:

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琼楼醉新月，似有促织咽。诉尽离念幽，引愁伤心切。

织入声^_^
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Posted: 2007-08-26 04:53:04 Post subject:

多情怎禁月，旧泪换新咽。最苦江上魂，暗伤更沉切。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-08-26 17:14:53 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

琼楼醉新月，似有促织咽。诉尽离念幽，引愁伤心切。

织入声^_^

呵呵，谢谢提醒，已经改喽！^_^

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Posted: 2007-08-26 17:28:50 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

多情怎禁月，旧泪换新咽。最苦江上魂，暗伤更沉切。

西楼隐清月，素冷伴箫咽。怨律伤雅魂，缓歌悲声切。

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Posted: 2007-08-27 06:46:28 Post subject:

云收得圆月，野岭鬼幽咽。料得惊梦时，可寻胎投切。 ^_^ _________________

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