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黎明随笔

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Posted: 2007-08-18 06:41:37 Post subject: 黎明随笔

黎明随笔此时无声, 在这黑白相交之际她在天上, 你在水中窗外, 唯有零乱的柳抽打风的骚动

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Posted: 2007-08-18 12:05:41 Post subject:

雅致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-08-18 13:06:18 Post subject:

精当. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-08-18 17:17:06 Post subject:

典雅.

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Posted: 2007-08-18 21:06:44 Post subject:

以我看，是她困了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-08-19 13:10:57 Post subject:

哈，　婉儿惜字，　各位朋友更惜字．看来大家都困了

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Posted: 2007-08-19 18:24:49 Post subject:

清纯的诗！！只是有些直白。也许是作者特意安排的吧。问候诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:07:21 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

雅致

谢谢

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:08:09 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

精当.

谢谢

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:08:33 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

典雅.

谢谢

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:09:03 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

以我看，是她困了

刚醒

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:09:35 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈，　婉儿惜字，　各位朋友更惜字．
看来大家都困了 Very Happy

那就接着睡

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Posted: 2007-08-20 04:11:00 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

清纯的诗！！只是有些直白。也许是作者特意安排的吧。问候诗人！！

没特意呀. 想哪写哪 smiling face

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Posted: 2007-08-20 09:10:27 Post subject:

抽打风的骚动　　－－　喜欢　这句　！！！。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-08-20 14:22:08 Post subject:

她在天上, 你在水中窗外, 唯有零乱的柳抽打风的骚动这几句好，前两句缺诗意，学习，拜读。

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Posted: 2007-08-20 15:53:24 Post subject:

呵呵~读过 _________________ 广东汕头潮南区峡山镇广祥路753号黄雪兰转黄史丹收(515144)

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Posted: 2007-08-21 18:38:38 Post subject:

新华 wrote:

她在天上, 你
在水中
窗外, 唯有零乱的柳
抽打风的骚动

这几句好，前两句缺诗意，学习，拜读。

是吗? 我再想想. 谢谢

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Posted: 2007-08-21 18:39:20 Post subject:

小衣 wrote:

呵呵~读过

谢读

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