婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 06:41:37 Post subject: 黎明随笔 |
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黎明随笔
此时无声, 在这
黑白相交之际
她在天上, 你
在水中
窗外, 唯有零乱的柳
抽打风的骚动 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 12:05:41 Post subject: |
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雅致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 13:06:18 Post subject: |
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精当. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 17:17:06 Post subject: |
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典雅. |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 13:10:57 Post subject: |
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哈, 婉儿惜字, 各位朋友更惜字.
看来大家都困了  |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 18:24:49 Post subject: |
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清纯的诗!!只是有些直白。也许是作者特意安排的吧。问候诗人!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:07:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:08:09 Post subject: |
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谢谢 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:08:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:09:03 Post subject: |
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刚醒 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:09:35 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
哈, 婉儿惜字, 各位朋友更惜字.
看来大家都困了  |
那就接着睡 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 04:11:00 Post subject: |
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杨海军 wrote: |
清纯的诗!!只是有些直白。也许是作者特意安排的吧。问候诗人!! |
没特意呀. 想哪写哪  |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 09:10:27 Post subject: |
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抽打风的骚动 -- 喜欢 这句 !!!
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 14:22:08 Post subject: |
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她在天上, 你
在水中
窗外, 唯有零乱的柳
抽打风的骚动
这几句好,前两句缺诗意,学习,拜读。 |
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小衣 童生
Joined: 10 May 2007 Posts: 28
小衣Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-20 15:53:24 Post subject: |
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呵呵~读过 _________________ 广东汕头潮南区峡山镇广祥路753号
黄雪兰转黄史丹收(515144) |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-21 18:38:38 Post subject: |
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新华 wrote: |
她在天上, 你
在水中
窗外, 唯有零乱的柳
抽打风的骚动
这几句好,前两句缺诗意,学习,拜读。 |
是吗? 我再想想. 谢谢 |
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婉儿 童生
Joined: 18 Nov 2006 Posts: 43 Location: 西北 婉儿Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-21 18:39:20 Post subject: |
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谢读 |
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