| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-10 20:01:11    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢.问好荷梦 |  | 
	
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		| 新华 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-12 00:59:10    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 拜读、欣赏。  |  | 
	
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		| huamei 童生
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-12 01:07:58    Post subject: hao |   |  
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		| 新华 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-16 02:02:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 短诗结合图片耐品,通观评语,这样的交流好。远握。 |  | 
	
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		| 彭世学 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 24 Jun 2007
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		| 迪拜 同进士出身
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-16 17:12:26    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 白水先生的诗歌 
 配上鲜艳的画
 
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		| 尹宗国 童生
 
 
 Joined: 17 Jul 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-16 17:25:13    Post subject: |   |  
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	  | 阳关夺目? 夕照?
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-16 19:18:05    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢各位朋友鼓励, 这是临屏之作, 可以说是一时灵感, 抑或说是蕴藏于心思绪的外溢吧. 文字上或许欠斟酌
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		| 新华 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-17 01:04:44    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 两段落差大,动情。  |  | 
	
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-18 03:14:36    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢新华, 问好 |  | 
	
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		| 新华 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-19 02:30:13    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 再读,敢问老师作画吗?还望多提意见,谢谢。 |  | 
	
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-19 13:17:57    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 哦, 不好意思, 我只喜欢赏画, 却无作画之才. 大家以诗会友, 诗歌只是我业余爱好, 称老师我真不敢当.
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		| 新华 秀才
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2007-08-19 18:29:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 写出了人的本质  |  | 
	
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